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Spiros Zafiris Senior Member
since 2002-10-20
Posts 982Canada 
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We had to change trains in Aleppo And I did not tell my lover That I had once named myself Fortitude The manicured nails of the fat man opposite me Were crying for the flesh of my beloved I checked my watch Twenty-five more minutes Then, looking at the manicured nails, refused an offering of oranges **** **** **** ..circa 1975..Copyright 1979/2002 Spiros Zafiris ..poem archived in several other sites |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
interesting feel to this...urgency, anxiety... Whether on the shoal or on the shore, |
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Radrook Senior Member
since 2002-08-09
Posts 648 |
Very good! Enjoyed the read! You have great talent! |
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Spiros Zafiris Senior Member
since 2002-10-20
Posts 982Canada |
..VAS../\.. + Radrook../\.. ..thanks for reading my poem; i appreciate your comments../\..Spiros --------------------skies-------- |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Oh Spiros, your writing is so unique and novel, I love the feel of anxiety you express here, this is wonderful, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Spiros, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Spiros Zafiris Senior Member
since 2002-10-20
Posts 982Canada |
.Mistletoe Angel../\..thanks for reading my poem(s); appreciate your comments.. ../\..Spiros ---------------------calm seas------ |
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