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JediRaver
Junior Member
since 2002-08-16
Posts 23
ATL, GA, USA

0 posted 2002-10-24 09:18 PM


Why am I here
being forced to learn something
for which I care nothing about?
Why does it matter
whether I'll pass or fail
if I won't be using it
after I graduate?
Am I doomed to failure again
when no matter how hard I try
I cannot rise above?

I don't think I can beat this!

So I continue to die in
this subject I hate
so completely and so much
more than anything I know.
No wonder its called, "Foreign"!
I cant' understand
what the point of this is
when none of it stays
affixed in my brain
but floods out
as soon as I hear it.
Why do I feel cheated
out of the time
that I have put into this
with no reward
and no motivation
just stumbling on
continuously
waiting for escape
thats taunting me
again and again
and laughs
at the burden of my folly...

-Jedi

© Copyright 2002 Ryan Flanagan - All Rights Reserved
Kethry
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082
Victoria Australia
1 posted 2002-10-25 04:24 PM


Jedi,
I'm guessing you are there because it's education and it's compulsory. Good rave about something we all can relate to.
BTTT
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown



the_loner_23
Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA
2 posted 2002-10-25 04:44 PM


I like this poem. But didn't you post this poem 3 different times? Just wondering.

Cold hands means a warm heart

Radrook
Senior Member
since 2002-08-09
Posts 648

3 posted 2002-10-30 04:39 PM



You have described our human condition of not being almighty very well.

All of us are caged to varying degrees.
Workers want to be out fishing instead.
Boxers wish the punches wouldn't sting so much. Mothers wish kids would be born with a quiet button top their heads. But nothing we can do about it.

That's just the point. Since we can do nothing about it why not try to enjoy or ignore? Not easy though is it? But this too will pass as they say.

Enjoyed the poem!
God bless!
Thanks for sharing.


Earth Angel
Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215
Realms of Light
4 posted 2002-10-30 04:50 PM



For me it was physics! Mind you, I didn't get to the low point that you have gotten, but guess what!---I barrelled on through it and was thrilled that I made a respectable grade.
First there was the agony and then there was ecstasy when the course was over and I had passed!

Keep on trekking! You'll be glad you did!

Earth Angel

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