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RMW
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0 posted 2002-10-30 03:28 PM


Clawing to Windward

What looks like grace
is just the wind,
bullying sails with its timeless argument
(true versus apparent)
while accelerating around the jib
a pressure gradient
that makes me think about choice
and compulsion.

RMW

[This message has been edited by RMW (10-30-2002 03:55 PM).]

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Radrook
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1 posted 2002-10-30 03:39 PM


Fate versus self-determination!
Very profound and very artistically expressed.

Enjoyed!

God Bless!

Walter Poe
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2 posted 2002-10-30 04:14 PM


Love the language im a bit of a word freak love jib windward electric words

The very deep did rot: O Christ!
That ever this should be!
Yea, slimy things did crawl with legs
Upon the slimy sea.

RMW
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3 posted 2002-10-30 04:30 PM


Radrook and Walter .... thank you for your thoughts. I enjoy spending time with things maritime. It's generally quiet (not many go there) and so the occasional company is most welcome. Thanks again. Bob
VAS
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4 posted 2002-10-30 04:33 PM


You have such fascinating perspective. Enjoyed reading this.

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

RMW
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5 posted 2002-10-30 04:36 PM


Hi, Virginia. And thanks, neighbor. Bob  
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6 posted 2002-10-30 04:55 PM




(sigh) Oh Rob, this is wonderful, sweet friend, to believe if something is true or apparent can be so bewildering yet as some winds can be so fierce and unmerciful others can be quite benign and can be transitions we boldfully make! (big hugggsssss) This is excellent, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Rob, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Martie
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7 posted 2002-10-30 05:31 PM


Bob

I always enjoy how you force me to look at things in a different way.  

Sunshine
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8 posted 2002-10-30 05:36 PM



I heard the sail snap...
welcome home, stranger...

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