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WhiteRose
Member Elite

since 2002-07-23

Posts 3208
somebody's dungeon

0 posted 2002-10-23 10:56 AM

It's within the small space
between, the night and day,
the shadow of play,
that tiny moment
between smile and frown.

I live in the space
between square and round.
The soften of edge
for curvature of line
I dwell between abundance
and lack of real time.

Enough of a place for me
so I reside there happily.

WhiteRose

"my reflection becomes me"

the_loner_23
Member Ascendant

since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

1 posted 2002-10-23 12:14 PM

I like this poem Anne.

Cold hands means a warm heart

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

2 posted 2002-10-23 11:17 PM

(sigh) Oh Anne, this is excellent, sweet friend, I love it, you describe such a special place so well in your words! (kiss on cheek) This is excellent, sweet friend, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Anne, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

3 posted 2002-10-23 11:37 PM

It may be a small space, but its your space--and that is a very special place to be.

EA

Radrook
Senior Member

since 2002-08-09

Posts 648

4 posted 2002-10-25 05:52 PM

Wow!
A lovely poem composed by a lovely woman. Enjoyed the read.
Thanks for sharing.

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

5 posted 2002-10-25 07:09 PM

Bravo...
A nice place to dwell...in the smile..
ThisDiamond

Robert Adamson
Member

since 2002-10-21

Posts 328
PA/USA

6 posted 2002-10-25 08:47 PM

You have lots of nice places. This was certainly one of them. Thank you

etoodog

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

7 posted 2002-10-25 08:48 PM

enjoyed

Spiros Zafiris
Senior Member

since 2002-10-20

Posts 982
Canada

8 posted 2002-10-25 09:16 PM

..WhiteRose../\..very nice; enjoyed reading..

../\..Spiros

---------------------calm seas-------

regards2you
Member Elite

since 2002-10-01

Posts 3940
California

9 posted 2002-10-25 09:34 PM

Wow! Acceptance, contentment and happiness ~does it get any better than that~? where do you live, I'm coming over (just kidding)(big smile) and, like it was so easy to get to this space, huh?

I enjoy all of your poetry.

Hoping it is even half as good as it sounds for you.

I enjoyed rereading this. It does seem happy and did make me smile. Great poem.

Thanks,
Warmly,
Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
"Desiderata"

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

10 posted 2002-11-05 04:11 AM

I need to find a place like this for me...

WhiteRose
Member Elite

since 2002-07-23

Posts 3208
somebody's dungeon

11 posted 2002-11-05 10:03 AM

Thank you everyone for your kind words, and for always reading.

Dixie, it's hard to find. But once you do, tis heaven

[This message has been edited by WhiteRose (11-05-2002 10:04 AM).]

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