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Kellie_Cantrell
Senior Member
since 2002-05-22
Posts 1667
New York

0 posted 2002-10-22 12:16 PM


In me. I should believe

I can find Love
I can find Loyalty
Honesty and hope
Purity and grace.
In me I find a sense of reality.
I can be opinionated.
but I usually keep it to myself.
Sometimes I wish I were someone else
Sometimes I wish I could speak out
Stand up for myself
Sometimes I can be hyper
Others I can be shy.

I am christian, I am pure
I am a daughter of God.
He is my Father. I love him so.

As I sit and sing my worship to him
I can feel his presence there.
This isn't a self discovery
I think everyone already knew.
I think I just was bored
and thought I'd let you know.

That I am me.
How Lucky can I be.
I can make my poetry tell what I feel.
I am so happy I am me.

© Copyright 2002 Kellie M. Cantrell - All Rights Reserved
Spiros Zafiris
Senior Member
since 2002-10-20
Posts 982
Canada
1 posted 2002-10-22 03:18 AM


..Kellie_Cantrell../\..poem is quite songlike;

i enjoyed reading; thanks../\..Spiros


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Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989

2 posted 2002-10-22 06:19 AM


Kellie a wonderful poem of insight to who you are, and we really like who you are!  
Very well done gal.  Hugs.

If I have touched one heart through my words, then I have acheived my dream...

regards2you
Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940
California
3 posted 2002-10-22 08:48 AM


Kellie, this is magnificent! Touches me and you expressed ideas so well.

Love this poem!


Hugs,
Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
        "Desiderata"

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