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Suetang
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0 posted 2002-10-18 12:15 PM



Picture by Josephine Wall

* * *

Will this nightmare soon be over
What if I curl up in a ball
And pretend this wasn't real
That it didn't happen at all

My memory helps to remind me
About a time when I felt free
In the days of youth and innocence
When no harm could come to me

I can't afford to show my feelings
To my one and only child
I do not want to frighten her
To have her mind running wild

The world seems so uncertain
It has become a frightening place
I have witnessed so much horror
Many tears have stained my face

I take comfort in the knowledge
That my father did not see
These sad and painful images
That have deeply affected me

The place where he now resides
Is one of peace and tranquility
Where love lives on forever
And where one's spirit is set free

It is time to stop this madness
Give back the freedom we all yearn
Let us not repeat history
From these tragedies we must learn

* * * *

Such a heavy heart I've had this past
week as I mourn all the lives lost in
the Bali tragedy.Has the world gone
mad and lost sight of peace and freedom?

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

© Copyright 2002 Sue Tancheff - All Rights Reserved
garysgirl
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1 posted 2002-10-18 12:41 PM


Sue, this is such a beautiful poem of a terrible tragedy. You wrote your feelings so well. Thanks so much for sharing. I'm praying for all of you and the ones who lost their loved ones.

Love To All,
Ethel

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2 posted 2002-10-18 01:57 AM


Sue,
Your social conscience strikes again. True and faithful. It is incomprehensible. Excellent write. Peace and courage to you and your family.

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

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3 posted 2002-10-18 02:02 AM


Beautifully penned.
Peace, the dream we must all continue to dream. The more horror we see, the more we must keep this dream alive, and the more we must act with Love for all humanity and Earth to achieve it.

NewEnglandlazurlu
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4 posted 2002-10-18 09:06 AM


Sue, your words so touched my broken heart and brought me to tears. It does indeed seem that our world has gone crazy and I think we all feel helpless to stop it and make it better.

There are days we should just crawl under a rock and hide.

Beautiful picture that goes so well with your poem.

Hugs, Marti

Life is not measured by the number of breaths we take, but by the moments that take our breath away.

Mistletoe Angel
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5 posted 2002-10-18 09:48 AM




(tears fall down my cheeks) Oh Sue, I too wish I could have lived in an earlier generation sometimes so I could live the world when it was much more peaceful, sweet friend, history does have a great share of problems but there is no excuse in repeating them when I wish we could all be working to learn from our mistakes and establish love for all our children! (big hugggssssss) My prayers and angel hugs go out to all the Bali victims, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Earth Angel
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6 posted 2002-10-18 09:59 AM


We need more people like you in this world to share love, beauty, compassion and peace.

Linda

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7 posted 2002-10-18 01:52 PM


Sue:  A very impressive and moving poem! Thanks for sending me the link.  

Betty Lou Hebert

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8 posted 2002-10-19 04:32 PM


Sue - a poem that cry out for reason - I hope many hear it especially the leaders of the US who plan to kill in Iraq.  Thanks for a lovely poignant poem - Paul
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9 posted 2002-10-23 10:58 PM


Sue~ A Very touching poem. My heart weeps for the world and the way things are these days...Paul
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