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Sea Song
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Sea Song |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace 
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Sea Song I stood to watch the surf go out and to come back to shore with intensity covering all it could in liquid shout heard in words of vapor density it whispered stories old from forgotten seas the ocean holds echoes in its depths of accept where water knows walking with the breeze but never to reveal the secrets kept I’m not disappointed, I never expected anything from you. [This message has been edited by 1slick_lady (10-18-2002 10:06 PM).] |
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RSWells Member Elite
since 2001-06-17
Posts 2533 |
The sea always in motion, never going anywhere.......but deep and brooding. Enjoyed |
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majnu
since 2002-10-13
Posts 1088SF Bay Area |
quite cool. it feels so old, so ancient like the very sea it speaks of and the secrets there held. nice. |
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bslicker
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321state of mind |
it seems the sea's never stop moving with the waves this is true cause even when it is calm the tide continues to move A smile a day keeps the world in smile's. |
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Thomas119gold Senior Member
since 2002-06-03
Posts 708Biloxi, MS (city by the sea) |
I stand on the shore smelling the salt in the air as I listen and hear the descriptions pour forth from your beautiful lips and I know the sirens sound will draw more sailors to the rocks for love is dangerous journey and I am a fool for your poetic style as are any who sail this sea of enchanted poems that you sing. Hey Helen good write Thomas AKA Rogue |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Helen, I loved this poem and the way it made me feel. Thanks for sharing your wonderful talent. Love To All, Ethel...garysgirl |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
helen, Dependable. Like you. Excellent write.  If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again. |
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Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
The tides of my memories, Washing out, Rip currents pulling at me, Dragging my soul far away, Pulling down, Emotions lost in the spray Of crashing waves on the beach, Nature’s shout, To ears my voice will not reach, Alone with my memories, In them drown My aspirations to be. Passing waves are battering, Pounding out, Untouched and not mattering Terra firma place to stand, Moves around And I find just sifting sands. Gloom |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
where water knows walking with the breeze but never to reveal the secrets kept ---------------------- Lovely Helen...much enjoyed. ~Hugs~ ~ Time has cast a spell on you |
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Opoetry4me Member
since 2002-10-11
Posts 126Dixon, Ky USA |
Loved it! If the ocean could only speak,the stories it could tell. Opoetry4me |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
Lady..this is simply beautiful. I miss reading here like this all day on my days off. Miss your work too. I'm always thinking of you and how you are. "two hearts will build the foundation for one point of light |
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S Arthur Grey Senior Member
since 2001-03-19
Posts 719woven by a poet's loom |
Nicely done. And you have awakened my sleeping pen with this piece. Thank you, Poetess. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
helen - beautiful write... BC |
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