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Sandpiper
Senior Member

since 2002-06-15

Posts 738
land of flora and fauna

0 posted 2002-11-28 07:19 AM

asleep, awake,
cinnamon-spice scents
of ovens then and now
wafting through
a thanking day

curled beneath
blanket sighs
holding the chill
of the warmth
I feel in you,
wondering
if your eyes
are yet soft closed

ah yes, my melancholy
Picasso in blue,
I do not leave you
alone;
I wake with you
and color
your white snow world
with the quiet leaf falls
of my autumn

I touch thankful today,
but I feel
you
and dream into
a someplace
I would rather be~~

whiskey

Senior Member

since 1999-12-28

Posts 1278
Australia

1 posted 2002-11-28 10:50 AM

Very nice I enjoyed it alot. Wonderful imagery thanks for sharing

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

2 posted 2002-11-28 10:57 AM

Sandpiper
Nice write, enjoyed the read.

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

3 posted 2002-11-28 11:22 AM

What a terrific poem!--and I love the title!

Earth Angel

VAS
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-16

Posts 7450
Oregon

4 posted 2002-11-28 11:30 AM

lovely, lovely, all the way, title, too, and 'thanking day'!

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

regards2you
Member Elite

since 2002-10-01

Posts 3940
California

5 posted 2002-11-28 11:42 AM

Sandpiper,

This is so special. I love every line of it.... WOW!

Warm regards, Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
"Desiderata"

RSWells
Member Elite

since 2001-06-17

Posts 2533

6 posted 2002-11-28 01:21 PM

It's easy to fall into your words which capture all the senses. Enjoyed.

EagleOne
Member Elite

since 2000-03-07

Posts 2829
Between a laugh and a tear...

7 posted 2002-11-28 03:47 PM

As with the other comments, I like this very much, well done!

I don't know where I'm running now, I'm just running on... ~ Jackson Browne

Christopher

Moderator

Member Rara Avis

since 1999-08-02

Posts 8296
Purgatorial Incarceration

8 posted 2002-11-28 08:56 PM

oh boy.

yep.

understood, felt, feeling, and wondering.

peace,

Chris

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

9 posted 2002-11-28 09:05 PM

(big hugggssssssss) Oh Sandpiper, this is wonderful, sweet friend, I send angel hugs out to you and hoipe this blue Picasso feeling becomes a Van Gogh starry night! (sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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