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bsquirrel
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0 posted 2002-11-12 02:42 PM


Ghostly, sensual beauty of blank spaces.

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Cpat Hair
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1 posted 2002-11-12 02:46 PM


troubled of late?

Empty
the spaces filled
with serene
until overflowing
they ran silence


bsquirrel
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2 posted 2002-11-12 02:47 PM


Nah, I'm doing okay. Just swamped. You know how that is. Hope you're doing well, Ron. I'll try to come back here again before the end of the day and respond some more.

Mikey

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3 posted 2002-11-12 02:49 PM


understand swamped... stealing a few here myself...
noticed the tenor of your works of late seemed to speak of unsure... just concerned... go work some more..that is alwyas good for you ( not)



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4 posted 2002-11-12 03:20 PM


Much is unsure, yes. As for example moving to Calgary. A lot more roadblocks to that act than I thought at first. And work becoming quite stressful of late. When I start throwing out poem after poem, it's my way of "escape." So you can usually tell my level of stress or bemusement (or boredom) by the quantity of poetry in a day.

How are you doing?

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5 posted 2002-11-12 03:22 PM


Yep, a wonderful lot of blank spaces just waiting to become....

invigorating thought in your 'poem'

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

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6 posted 2002-11-12 03:41 PM


I'm fine...stressed here at work as usual... playing a waiting game in part for final direction to be decided and then.... who knows... lots up in the air here as well...

good seeing you... take care of yourself... and don't let uncertainty eat you up...

( I know it is easy to say...)


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7 posted 2002-11-12 04:16 PM


How wonderful to visualize the peacefulness, even as I am aware it is not...
The dual faces of art. ThisDiamond

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8 posted 2002-11-12 06:34 PM


You have damn good lines, Squirrel Guy, and just that way of making me sigh sometimes.

Loved this and I felt the space.

"two hearts will build the foundation for one point of light
a duet done with passion"

excerpt from "I Love You"

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