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Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

0 posted 2002-10-13 01:03 PM

“WOULDN’T IT”
by
Bill Charles
~~~~
To love someone
who would share
their love in
return…

Someone to love,
wouldn’t it be
something…
~~~~

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

1 posted 2002-10-13 01:15 PM

It sure would Bill!
So much said in so few words.
~Hugs~

~ Time has cast a spell on you
So you won't ever forget me ~

Ivy Rose
Senior Member

since 2001-12-29

Posts 1300
MA, USA

2 posted 2002-10-13 02:25 PM

It is always something when the love you give is given back to you. Being alone can make you feel so isolated, abandoned; but it would be wonderful if everyone had someone to share life's ups and downs with. Very potent gem of a poem. ***Ivy Rose

[This message has been edited by Ivy Rose (10-13-2002 02:26 PM).]

SimplyGold
Senior Member

since 2002-07-10

Posts 1453

3 posted 2002-10-13 02:44 PM

Bill,

With so many people looking for the same thing why do you suppose this is so hard to find? Keep looking and good luck.

SG

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

4 posted 2002-10-13 02:45 PM

(sigh) Oh Bill, I think that is the most beautiful feeling in all the world, sweet friend, this is gorgeous and I wish for this love to always shine in your heart, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Bill, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

5 posted 2002-10-13 04:51 PM

loved it

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

6 posted 2002-10-13 11:33 PM

It would---and it will!

EA

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

7 posted 2002-10-13 11:43 PM

Simple and straight forward perfection.
ThisDiamond

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

8 posted 2002-10-13 11:48 PM

Bill, this is really good....the thought behind the poem and the poem itself. I wish that EVERYBODY could find a "true Love".
thanks for sharin.
Love To All,
Ethel

vlraynes
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

9 posted 2002-11-12 03:00 AM

Bill~
Oh yes, my friend...it certainly would.
If you only knew how loudly this speaks to my heart.*sigh*
Thank you for sharing this, my friend.
Hugs,
~Vicky
"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

Robert Adamson
Member

since 2002-10-21

Posts 328
PA/USA

10 posted 2002-11-12 08:05 AM

I liked this. If it were a little note in a bottle, someday it may be found. Best wishes.

etoodog

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

11 posted 2002-11-12 10:30 AM

To him who is patient comes a rainbow.
You will find this rainbow...

Martie

Moderator

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since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

12 posted 2002-11-12 10:36 AM

Bill

Yes indeed! But, you knew that. Loved the thought in this poem!

Kethry
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

13 posted 2002-11-12 06:42 PM

Yep, Yep. good thought, good write
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown

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