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dougsbird21
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0 posted 2002-11-08 10:51 PM


No Picasso

Gentle ribbons of color
Ripple all around me
Paint wrap me in rainbows
Yet somehow I remain pale
Indifferent to the differences outside me
No change inside
Still black and white
I long to have some inner brightness
A pastel dabbed soul to contain me
But it seems I am an artist
Whose palette was never filled

Write what you feel, not what u think you should feel.

© Copyright 2002 Lisa Cherubini/Somerset - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-11-08 10:58 PM




(smiles) Yes, you are the artist and only you can create the colors with the rainbow you unleash from your heart! (sigh) Now go paint a starry night like Van Gogh, yay, this is wonderful, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Lisa, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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2 posted 2002-11-08 11:57 PM


intriguing.

you did a mighty fine job on this piece, and i thank you for sharing.

no one could ever be picasso, but picasso himself.  

/jen/

what if they gave a war, and nobody came...

the_loner_23
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3 posted 2002-11-08 11:58 PM


Awesome write

Cold hands means a warm heart

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4 posted 2002-11-08 11:58 PM


oh, and...



i love that smiley.  

/jen/

what if they gave a war, and nobody came...

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5 posted 2002-11-09 12:03 PM


Dip into your color wheel and we will know you when you emerge, trust that we will know you.
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6 posted 2002-11-09 12:54 PM


I love this! Your palette is no doubt full; maybe somedays the brush just cannot hold all that lies before it.
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7 posted 2002-11-09 09:17 AM


When I read your poems, it seems you have found your true colors.

I like your work very much and hope you will continue to share with us. You have a style that is quite unique.

Hugs, Marti

"I am not afraid of STORMS
for I have learned how to sail my
SHIP."              Louisa May Alcott

(I'm not changing this for anyone!)

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8 posted 2002-11-09 09:18 AM


Nice poem.. Enjoyed the read... Thank you for sharing...

I wish to become a great poet some day, but it will only come in time. Til then, I shall write my poems, and wait.

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