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Bluesy Socrateaser
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since 2002-11-07

Posts 2417
In The Mirror

0 posted 2002-11-07 08:32 PM

Pleased to make your acquaintance.
I see you've loosened your wrap.
May I take it for you?
It's a bit crowded I know, but still,
it's a comfortable air that keeps me.
I hope it does the same for you.
Tell me, what was it that brought you here?
Please don't say "the car".
My previous entanglement used to say that.
Was that a slight smile I just saw?
I know you have your burdens, and your temptations.
They seem to want to follow you.
Of course they do.
So do I.
It's said the nights are long here, and that the dawn
whispers it's way into the early hours on warm breezes.
I'd like to listen to it sometime with you.
Bold?
No, at least that's not the intention.
There's an allotted time for us all.
All we know of it is that it's short.
We shouldn't make it any shorter, just learn to live within it's
set parameters, and enjoy it's unique emotions and struggles.
Whoops!
Sorry if I sound like I'm preaching.
It's a habit.
As if I really knew you.
I want to.
I guess I just want to let you know that I feel for you.
I could as soon as you came in.
I'd like to spend some time together with you.
If you'd like that.
It's all in the dreaming...maybe.
Floating on turbulent waters towards a distant shore.
It's good to sail on high seas.
Someone once said that sexuality was equal to one's
perceptions and expressions of bodies of water.
The deep oceans I see in your eyes makes me feel it was you.
The sands will be warm...
Let's leave this place, and marry our dreams together,
'til the dawn whispers in the new day.

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

1 posted 2002-11-07 08:43 PM

"It's good to sail on high seas.
Someone once said that sexuality was equal to one's
perceptions and expressions of bodies of water.
The deep oceans I see in your eyes makes me feel it was you.
The sands will be warm...
Let's leave this place, and marry our dreams together,
'til the dawn whispers in the new day."

Max, I like your style

Welcome!

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

2 posted 2002-11-07 08:50 PM

WELCOME TO PASSIONS!!
Enjoyed your first post!
Please check your email for a special greeting.

Connel

Senior Member

since 2002-11-04

Posts 736
Florida, USA

3 posted 2002-11-07 09:20 PM

Your very first post on passions. Aint that suck a good poem? Welcome to passions my dear friend,.. I know you will like it here.. There are nothing but good people here,.. And im glad that you have chosen passions. I cant wait to read more of your beautiful words. Thank you for sharing your poetry.

I wish to become a great poet some day, but it will only come in time. Til then, I shall write my poems, and wait.

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

4 posted 2002-11-07 09:49 PM

Original and provocative...welcome to PIP.
Look forward to reading more of you...
ThisDiamond

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

5 posted 2002-11-07 09:57 PM

(smiles) Oh Max, this is such a gorgeous honest dedication to your love,s weet friend, I wish this happiness for you and may all your dreams comne true, this is fabulous, I LOVE IT!!! Welcome to Passions, sweet Max, may you be inspired by all of us here as we will all be inspired by your lovely words! I can't wait to read more of your lovely words, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Max, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Mysteria

Member Laureate

since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

6 posted 2002-11-07 09:59 PM

Bluesy Socrateaser

I sure enjoyed your first meeting with your icon, and look forward to more of your poetry, this was a hoot!

A smile costs nothing, give one away and make someone rich.

Martie

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since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

7 posted 2002-11-07 10:22 PM

Bluesy

Wonderful with a trace of smile....Welcome to Passions!

scorpio
Member Ascendant

since 2002-10-02

Posts 5178
right...there

8 posted 2002-11-07 10:49 PM

quietlydying

Senior Member

since 2001-06-10

Posts 935
the wonderful land of oz

9 posted 2002-11-07 10:53 PM

thanks for the read.

and welcome to passions!!

/jen/

what if they gave a war, and nobody came...

RSWells
Member Elite

since 2001-06-17

Posts 2533

10 posted 2002-11-08 12:14 PM

First class pick-up lines, first class first post. Welcome.

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

11 posted 2002-11-08 10:09 AM

Welcome to Passions, Max. I do believe you're going to settle in quickly, and entertain us with your style and wit. Looking forward to reading more from you. If you have any questions, don't hesitate to ask.

Karilea
If I whisper, will you listen?...
I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

12 posted 2002-11-08 10:27 AM

Max.......
WELCOME TO PASSIONS IN POETRY.
I enjoyed reading your first post and look forward to much more. I can tell you will like it here.

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~

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