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MARK V SHELDON
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0 posted 2002-11-06 10:52 PM


"TWENTY OR LESS...#70"

Copyright 2002 by: MARK V SHELDON


The freedom
to lose

A need
to find


"AS ABOVE SO BELOW"

© Copyright 2002 Mark V Sheldon - All Rights Reserved
Mistletoe Angel
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1 posted 2002-11-06 10:54 PM




Wow!!! Oh Mark, I just love how thisn feels contradictive yet right at the same time it is completely out of proportion when spoken, I love it, such wonderful contemplation fills such few words, I LOVE IT, I'm so happy to see you again as you have been missed, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Mark, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton


"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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MARK V SHELDON
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2 posted 2002-11-06 10:58 PM


Thank you, Noah...  this is but one of infinite paradoxes in life...

-MVS

"AS ABOVE SO BELOW"

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3 posted 2002-11-07 12:00 PM


the freedom to find
a need that was lost....


so many ways this makes the mind think....
I always like your 20 or less poems...

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4 posted 2002-11-07 12:17 PM


Mark,

Short but very profound.

                             Dawn

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5 posted 2002-11-07 12:20 PM


Hello Mark

Fabulous and very wise words to ponder.  It's nice to see you here again and I hope all is well in your part of the world.

Take care......Sue

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
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6 posted 2002-11-07 12:27 PM


A need
to find


the freedom
to lose

a way
to see

the path
understood



MARK V SHELDON
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7 posted 2002-11-07 12:39 PM


SEA:  thank you, and I enjoy every one of those ways...

Dawn G:  you know what they say about size...   Thanks for the read.

Sue:  it's been such a long time!  All is well and busy 'round here but am glad to be back with a new iBook laptop and a cable connection!  I look forward to reading you again.  Hope all's well with you too...  What's new down under...?

Ron, my friend...  it almost feels like a high school reunion of sorts, what with all of these wonderful familiar "faces"...  The path may not always be understood, let alone seen, but the need is always there, freedom or otherwise...  Good to hear from you again!  (Did you ever publish your first book of poetry -- it's been over a year, no... )

-MVS

"AS ABOVE SO BELOW"

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8 posted 2002-11-07 12:50 PM


Mark.. I am not here much..and now I only read or add perhaps a bit as I did in way of reply.. publish..no.. I have never seriously considered publishing, though I know you have in jest urged me to... I saw you name..and had to read, then had to reply in some form... for it made me think of your starting down the 20 or less path... and how I have enjoyed them all...
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