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0 posted 2002-11-05 12:50 PM


It helps to write when
our hearts ache
like now,
we feel
The disappointments coming for
different reasons, from
circumstances beyond
our control
Our plans for this weekend
together this time
cancellation is
possible
To be together for even short
times of happiness
to share our
love
Yes, to write helps when this
loneliness for each
other grips our
hearts
Longing to see each other
just to be together to
enjoy each others
company
When distance separates us
because of situations
we've gotten
into
It helps to write when miles
can't be reached through,
just to touch our
fingertips
Still, we both are so very
thankful our hearts of
love feel no
distance
Of this, it always helps to
write, of our love
we will always
write


© Copyright 2002 Ethel GG Kent - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-11-05 12:54 PM


very sweet Ethel *s...writing helps  sort out many things

~smiling
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2 posted 2002-11-05 01:09 PM




(sigh) Oh Ethel, this is sooooooo beautiful and so true, sweet friend, and your love for Gary is so strong and I know he can't wait to read all these gorgeous poems the day you finally are married and never again have to long from distances apart! (kiss on cheek) This is heartfelt, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ethel, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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3 posted 2002-11-05 01:26 PM


Maureen, it sure does. And I really appreciate
all the wonderful people here at PIP who try to help us
sort out things. Thank you for reading and leaving a reply.

Love makes the world go 'round (unkown)
with love and hugs from Ethel
                  

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4 posted 2002-11-05 01:30 PM


Noah, thank you so much for your sweet reply. I
knew that you would know exactly how I feel. because of
you and Joanna loving each other so much and not being able
to see each other every day. It really hurts. Gary and I
had our hopes all built up to see each other this weekend
and now it may not happen.

Love makes the world go 'round (unkown)
with love and hugs from Ethel
                  

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5 posted 2002-11-05 01:32 PM


Ethel, this is very true. Writing helps to release so many feelings.
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6 posted 2002-11-05 01:35 PM


Ethel writing is downright theraputic at times.  I Can feel the emotions in this.
Hugs.

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7 posted 2002-11-05 02:03 PM


Sue, thanks for reading my poem, and for your reply.
I appreciate it.

Love makes the world go 'round (unkown)
with love and hugs from Ethel
                  

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8 posted 2002-11-05 02:10 PM


Donna, it sure is. Writing helps get out those pent-up feelings
that would probably make us explode if they stayed inside us.
It feels that way sometimes, anyway. Don't you think?
Yeah, I'm feeling the emotions in this poem very much today.
In fact. I may just go to the "feelings forum" and try to
get some of these feelings out. I don't like to be depressed and
down feeling. I've found that we have to help ourselves with
the emotions we have at times.
Thanks, Donna.

Love makes the world go 'round (unkown)
with love and hugs from Ethel
                  

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