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0 posted 2002-11-04 11:18 PM


O but for the break of day
would not darkness dwell.
Dwell heavily in one’s heart
in whispers not to say.

Were not for the moment,
for times spoken in jest.
For memories carried as
an endless chain, dragging.

O but for the fleeting glimpse
of that which treasures hold.
Of diamonds and rubies,
of silver and polished gold.

Were not for the moment,
for times spoken in truth.
For that which is a dream.
For that which was youth.

For each day, each second
each love that I have held.
For each thought, each fear,
each tear that has welled.

For these and this memory
I walk away, once loved.
Feeling what has been felt.
Knowing what is shared.

© Copyright 2002 Barry J. Tackett - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-11-04 11:35 PM




(sigh) Yes, love is what matters most and to have loved once is better than to have never loved at all, for the afterglow never leaves and is like the diamonds and gold we tuck away in our treasure chests! (big hugggssssss) I love it, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Barry, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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2 posted 2002-11-04 11:36 PM


For these and this memory
I walk away, once loved.
Feeling what has been felt.
Knowing what is shared.''


Barry~


I had tears....*sigh* maybe just my mood....
this is beautiful, and leaves me wanting more....


Lauren~

Deep inside the stillness
........I can hear you speak
You're still an inspiration
........To me

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3 posted 2002-11-04 11:41 PM


Tis true, all that glitters is not gold
it's how we perceive things
and hold dear the memories shared.


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4 posted 2002-11-05 12:03 PM


AAAAWWWW, I love this, Barry. Good memories are precious,
aren't they? Nothing can ever take those from us.

Love makes the world go 'round (unkown)
with love and hugs from Ethel
                  

ThisDiamond
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5 posted 2002-11-05 12:16 PM


All so precious...good memories, good friendships...great loves. ThisDiamond
Robert Adamson
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6 posted 2002-11-05 12:22 PM


Good thoughts, better tomarrows and certainly, best wishes. Thank you.  

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7 posted 2002-11-05 06:18 AM


So touching and beautiful Barry.  It has a certain beauty, but sadness to it.  Loved this.  
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8 posted 2002-11-05 01:53 PM


This is so beautiful. It's good to have such precious memories.
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