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Bill Charles
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0 posted 2002-11-01 08:34 PM


“DID YOU KNOW”
by
Bill Charles
~~~~
Did you know if I was an apple hanging on a tree,
I would love you, if you took a bite out of me…

Did you know if I was a hermit living by a lake,
I would love you, if you baked me a small cake…

Did you know if I was rich beyond compare,
I would love you, if you said yes I do care…

Did you know if I was homeless somewhere on the street,
I would love you, for you made my life complete…

Did you know if I was poor with just about nothing,
I would love you, you make me feel like something…

Did you know if I was with you kissing your soft skin,
I would love you, for my heart would know where to begin…

Did you know if I was a hobo riding the rails,
I would love you, and remember when you had pigtails…

And if you didn’t know that I feel this way with each thing,
I would still love you, for it is you to me you bring…
~~~~

© Copyright 2002 Bill Charles - All Rights Reserved
nakdthoughts
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1 posted 2002-11-01 08:41 PM


Yes I have known it all along, Bill

hugsssssss
M

couldn't resist the answer

Mistletoe Angel
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2 posted 2002-11-01 08:41 PM




(sigh) This is sooooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, a tear came to my ete reading this as you are so deserving of the most beautiful love and I know you would forever make that special woman happy to eternity! (big hugggsssssss) I wish this happiness to you with all my heart, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Bill, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

reluctantlyme
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since 2002-10-28
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3 posted 2002-11-01 08:41 PM


It's great to have a 'you' to love and write about.  Thanks for a feel good poem, very timely.


No matter how good looking she is... someone, somewhere is glad she's gone.
---Davey's helmet

Enchantress
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4 posted 2002-11-01 09:50 PM


Very romantic Bill.
Much enjoyed the read.
~Hugs~

~Love, like magic, depends on believing.~

garysgirl
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5 posted 2002-11-01 09:55 PM


Bill, you   KNOW   I   LOOOVVVEEEE   this!!!!

Love To All,
Ethel

[This message has been edited by garysgirl (11-01-2002 09:56 PM).]

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