navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #23 » Part Of Me Went With You
Open Poetry #23
Post A Reply Post New Topic Part Of Me Went With You Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
Suetang
Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia

0 posted 2002-11-01 04:46 PM



Picture by Josephine Wall

* * *

I feel you here beside me
Each and every day
I think about you fondly
And in my heart you'll always stay

I gaze towards the heavens
As I search the sky so blue
I often wonder if you see me
While I stop and think of you

Part of me went with you
On the day you passed away
My life then lost its focus
And my blue skies turned to grey

But the times we spent together
Are so vivid in my mind
I remember so much about you
Your heart and soul so very kind

I hold a candle to your memory
As my love for you burns bright
Thoughts of you I hold so dearly
Of your face I'll not lose sight

* * * *

I still miss my father so much even though
it has been over three years since he died.
He was the left hand to my right and his
passing left an empty place in my heart.
I often feel the need to write about the
love I have for him even though he is not
with me physically.

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

© Copyright 2002 Sue Tancheff - All Rights Reserved
Mistletoe Angel
Deputy Moderator 10 ToursDeputy Moderator 10 ToursDeputy Moderator 5 Tours
Member Empyrean
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon
1 posted 2002-11-01 04:50 PM




(big hugggssssssss) Oh Sue, I know right now from up above your dad is smiling as he loves you so much and wishes he could tell you millions of times how much he does love you but know he will always be guiding you with every step you make and part of you didn't go with him, because his love will always be there inside of you as a father and daughters love is forever! (wipes tears) God Bless You, sweet firend, I send many angel hugs to you today, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Enchantress
Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113
Canada eh.
2 posted 2002-11-01 04:56 PM


Sue, our loved ones never really leave us when they pass over...
we hold them close in our hearts with all the memories.
I know how much you loved and miss your dad..
you can bet he's watching you, smiling at you,
and is so very very proud of you.
~Heart Hugs~

~Love, like magic, depends on believing.~

Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354
Listening to every heart
3 posted 2002-11-01 05:19 PM



Ah Sue, you're tugging...
It's been 14 years since my father died.
I can still smell his aftershave...

if only in my mind.

SmartChick
Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081
On A Journey To The Unknown
4 posted 2002-11-01 06:44 PM


Sue, my brother died over twenty years ago. And, I still miss him so much.
Magnus
Deputy Moderator 1 TourDeputy Moderator 1 Tour
Member Laureate
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA
5 posted 2002-11-01 06:45 PM


I am fortunate...I still have the grace of
having mine....though I miss someone special
as do you...  My mother is dearly missed..

Thanx for the beautiful post SueT..

*Stubby*
Member
since 2002-09-19
Posts 122

6 posted 2002-11-01 06:56 PM


J

garysgirl
Deputy Moderator 10 ToursDeputy Moderator 5 ToursDeputy Moderator 1 Tour
Member Laureate
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237
Florida, USA
7 posted 2002-11-01 10:19 PM


Oh, Sue...this is beautiful, but so sad.
My heart goes out to you for your missing
your Dad so much. I still have my Mom
and Dad, for which I am so thankful. I hate
to even think of the day when I will lose
them from this earth.
I am so glad, though, that you have such
loving memories of your Dad, Sue.

Thanks for sharing your heart with us.


Love To All,
Ethel

NewEnglandlazurlu
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470
A Mountain Paradise
8 posted 2002-11-02 07:46 PM


Hi Sue,

'...I gaze towards the heavens
As I search the sky so blue
I often wonder if you see me
While I stop and think of you...'

Your Dad is definitely looking down and seeing you and his spirit is always with you. He is the wind the blows, the rain that falls and the sun that shines on you and your family. He is the flowers that bloom in your beautiful garden and the words that form the wonderful poems that you write so elequently.

Thank you for sharing this and the picture is exquisite.

Hugs to you my friend, Marti

vandana
Deputy Moderator 5 Tours
Member Patricius
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463
USA
9 posted 2002-11-02 08:21 PM


nice
Trillium
Deputy Moderator 10 ToursDeputy Moderator 10 ToursDeputy Moderator 10 ToursDeputy Moderator 1 Tour
Member Patricius
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098
Idaho, USA
10 posted 2002-11-02 10:53 PM


Sue:  It's so hard to asjust to life without someone you love deeply, as you do your Dad.  I know you cherish all the lovely memories you have and hope things get a bit easier as time goes on.

Betty Lou Hebert

Post A Reply Post New Topic ⇧ top of page ⇧ Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.
navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #23 » Part Of Me Went With You

Passions in Poetry | pipTalk Home Page | Main Poetry Forums | 100 Best Poems

How to Join | Member's Area / Help | Private Library | Search | Contact Us | Login
Discussion | Tech Talk | Archives | Sanctuary