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Edge of a Dream
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Edge of a Dream |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania 
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Edge of a Dream Will you please walk me through your dreams Along the mind’s sweet flowing streams Or to the place your visions roam On mountain crest or ocean foam? Would you escort one such as I Into the colors of your eye That twirl your pleasure in the wind In freedom’s twister left to spin? May I please delve into the deep Of fragile thoughts before you sleep Revolving prisms as they shift, Within the breath of slumber's drift May I please come into your heart To share with you the splendid part Of dreamer’s eye that ever yearns A crystal's spectrum as it turns For I have places yet to see That rest in your tranquility And I would sail a dreamer’s sea With you, if it were meant to be Elizabeth Santos October 29, 2002 [This message has been edited by Elizabeth Santos (10-29-2002 06:01 AM).] |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
Dear Elizabeth, this is wonderful writing that you have shared with us here, come enter the dreams of a dreamer, share expectations, the wonderings of love, the riches awaiting and the relisation of truth when the dawn does break yet again. Much enjoyed. Sincerely Rick |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Elizabeth~ Just a beautiful poem that flows so smooth. You are so good at painting vivid pictures with your words, I am in awe of your poems such as this one...Paul |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Elizabeth, I love to read your poems. They are always to beautiul. |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Elizabeth, I love to read your poetry aloud, for the cadence just rolls off the tongue. Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
"May I please delve into the deep Of fragile thoughts before you sleep Revolving prisms as they shift, Within the breath of slumber's drift" Ah Liz ... this flows as sweetly as a lullabye. Beautiful sentiments and phrasing to drift one into the visions you have portrayed. Just lovely.  Best wishes and hugs,  /Kit |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Rick, Thank you for the delightful description of my poem. I'm glad you liked it Paul, Very kind remarks, Thank you, Paul SmaertChick, THank you so much for reading.I really appreciate your comments Kethry, The ultimate compliment - to read a poem aloud, as it should be Thank you, dearfriend Liz |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Elizabeth, Of course you may and always will. You are a part of my dreaming still. till I get back. Sy Marvelous poem. |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Kit Hi, lil sis! you could have signed this and nobody would know the difference Must be in the genes! Thanks, dear Sy, I forget where you're going, but have a pleasant trip Thank you for your sweet remarks Liz |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
'... For I have places yet to see That rest in your tranquility And I would sail a dreamer’s sea With you, if it were meant to be ...' Liz, with each poem that you write, I sit here and marvel at your talent. This is just exquisite. Hugs, Marti Life is not measured by the number of breaths we take, but by the moments that take our breath away. |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Marti, Warm words coming from a much respected poetess Thank you so much HUgs Liz |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Ah Liz..this piece is as gentle and soft as a romantic dream. Beautiful words..so delicately placed upon the page. ~Hugs~ ~ Time has cast a spell on you |
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Juliette Junior Member
since 2002-10-28
Posts 13Colorado |
Elizabeth, Absolutely perfect imagery. Excellent! |
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garysgirl 
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Elizabeth, I love the way you do this. It's so bautiful. I was I could write the way you do. thanks for sharing. Love To All, Ethel |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Oh, Elizabeth, there is seemingly no end to your wonderful gift, and for that I am eternally grateful!! This was a joy to read... Pen how you truly feel... |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Awwwwwwwww, this is sooooooo gorgeous, sweet friend, I love it, and I wish for you to find all those other hideen horizons and wonderlands deep in loves depths forever and ever and to fill you with joy! (kiss on cheek) This is breathtaking, sweet friend, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Elizabeth, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
This is so beautiful that it gives me a warm glow inside, Liz... Thanks for sharing it with us  ~ dreamy chipmunk hugsLyra |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Dreamy, Elizabeth! And beautifully done, as always! |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Thank you, passionate poets, for your very kind comments to this poem. HUgs Liz |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Oh Liz, this is so serene and lovely! Take care, Melissa~ "Poetry is not an opinion expressed... |
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