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Teen Poetry #6

Goodbye

Sega13
New Member

since 2002-12-03

Posts 5
Chicago

0 posted 2002-12-04 03:01 PM

There are so many things you've got to sacrifice,
but love shouldn't be one of them.
If you find your true soulmate in life
never let them say goodbye.

But if you do say goodbye,
you'll never forgive yourself,
and regret it for the rest of your life.

You might have your differences,
but for the best it is.
You'll be living a lie,
if you never say goodbye.

[This message has been edited by Sega13 (12-04-2002 09:52 PM).]

Smoothy
Member

since 2002-12-02

Posts 119
The dark side of the moon

1 posted 2002-12-04 08:07 PM

Welcome!
This is a good new entry to the forums and definitely one I can understand. I'm all about love poetry. Good job!

HopelessRomanticGuy
Member

since 2001-08-17

Posts 495
LI, New York

2 posted 2002-12-04 09:49 PM

Well, well! Isn't this the nice little poem! I can totally understand where your coming from. Hope to read more from ya!

Rich

"You can't hurt meee!! 'Cause I've got on my cheeeeese helmet!"

Trista Gale
New Member

since 2002-12-04

Posts 5

3 posted 2002-12-04 10:40 PM

Nice job Sega13. Well-written from beginning to end. Keep it up!

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