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Teen Poetry #6

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Avis
Junior Member

since 2002-12-01

Posts 38
Raleigh, NC, USA

0 posted 2002-12-04 01:08 AM

The path ahead, foggy.
The lights are very low.
Are you my friend?
Or are you my foe?

I wish there was something;
Something to guide
I wish there was somone
In whom I can confide.

Learning the hard way
Makes too much pain.
Just skip that torrent
Of harsh, stinging rain.

Thunder reminds us
Of that which will be,
Of that which is hanging,
And that which we now see.

Skip over the lightning.
Though you see all 'round,
You can see the damage,
Cluttering the ground.

There must be a way
To know how to be,
Without pain for others;
Without pain for me.

Written: 10/29/02
Dedication: To every teen learning the hard way.

Peace and Love,
~KEV~

"An eye for an eye only leads to more blindness."
~Margaret Atwood

WinterWren
Senior Member

since 2002-12-01

Posts 1044
...Coming to

1 posted 2002-12-04 05:47 PM

Im really liking your poetry, you are a very good writer! I can really relate to that poem. Thanks for the dedication!

Laugh often, love much, live well.

WinterWren
"I want you to believe in life. Will you find out who you are too late, to change? -Dishwalla-

Avis
Junior Member

since 2002-12-01

Posts 38
Raleigh, NC, USA

2 posted 2002-12-04 06:59 PM

Thank you!!!

Peace and Love,
~KEV~

IM me at Tempus Vivo

HopelessRomanticGuy
Member

since 2001-08-17

Posts 495
LI, New York

3 posted 2002-12-04 10:04 PM

I like the way you write, not to mention your choice of topics! Great poem! I know how it feels to learn the hard way, I'm just sorry to see others do as well....

Rich

"You can't hurt meee!! 'Cause I've got on my cheeeeese helmet!"

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