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lonelyone2032
Junior Member

since 2002-11-17

Posts 13

0 posted 2002-11-20 08:57 PM

DREAMING
laughing and walking upon this gentle land
talking, smiling, and holding hands
you know i love you
and i know you love me too
your brown eyes express it all
your no longer embarrassed of me
you stop playing for a fool
your doing exactly what you told me you would do
you don't make me feel like i did before
your race dosn't matter anymore
my parents finally agreed with me
the tears that once ran down my face
dried up and went away
but i wake up and see
that all i have been doing was weeping endlessly
because i know it was all a dream
and thats all it will ever be

let me know what u think! much luv, ASH

[This message has been edited by lonelyone2032 (11-20-2002 09:10 PM).]

Ina
Senior Member

since 2000-10-09

Posts 1236
Quebec, Canada

1 posted 2002-11-20 09:01 PM

i enjoyed this piece. its tough when your parents dont approve.
i liked the poem
keep writing

xShUgArHiGhx

Member Elite

since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

2 posted 2002-11-20 10:47 PM

It's a shame when mixed-race relationships are frowned upon...im in one...what difference does it make? arent we all the same?? i think you did a great job on this..i can really relate to it well..glad to see your parents are accepting of the relationship

Standing on the edge of the world
Now I don’t want you to catch me
I want you to let me
Stand up here and walk on my own

vlraynes
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

3 posted 2002-11-25 12:34 PM

lonelyone2032~
Such a sad situation and you've expressed it well.
I hope everything works out for you.
~Vicky
"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

rOxXbabY391
Member

since 2002-12-14

Posts 71

4 posted 2002-12-19 04:12 PM

Wow I don't know who this writer is but this poem is AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!! You must be the best writer I've ever seen... LoL KudOz to MuH CUzzzin!!! lolll gotta luv that capage makin us write our dream poems!! LoL
~*~eMiLy~*~

"I don't think I can make it through one more night. 'Cause how do you answer "What's wrong?" ~ when nothing is right."

WinterWren
Senior Member

since 2002-12-01

Posts 1044
...Coming to

5 posted 2002-12-20 12:19 PM

That was a reallllly beautiful poem, especially the last lines, they're sooo sad! Hope everything works!

WinterWren
"I want you to believe in life. Will you find out who you are too late, to change?" -Dishwalla-

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