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Like a brother
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Like a brother |
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Pollita Member
since 2002-07-25
Posts 220the unknown realm of insanity |
You were always like a brother to me, I could tell you everything. I'm going to grow up, To be someone like you. We are the 'Dark Duo'. You'd help me, With all the problems I normally have. If i ever lost you, I don't know what i'd do. I could trust you, Even though it's not easy for me to trust. You're always there, When I need a shoulder to cry one. When my skies are grey, You seem to make everything fine. You understand exactly how i feel, For you've felt the same way before. You try to protect me, From life's worst experiences. The world can be so cold, But when your around you always bring sunshine. When I have a bad day, You help me cope. I'll miss you, When you go off to college. I love you. Because to me, You'll always be like a brother ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ I wrote this poem for my friend Alex. He's just like a big brother. And i'm glad that he's in my life. I can turn to him for advice, as I already have. And he can always make me smile when i'm about to cry.  I guess thats what friends are for...Tell me what you think... Thanks for reading! |
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Android 17
since 2001-07-21
Posts 664Winnipeg |
*puts hands together, and turns to mush* M-AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAW!!! DELANEY!!! ^_^ Jeez! ^_^ You even remembered the "Dark Duo" thing! Awesome! You know I luv'ya! Yup, yup, yup! You are SO jacked, from Krista!  HeheheheWow---I love this! You have no idea how much it means to me! Like---REALLY! Sometimes it just feels like I ramble on to myself---but, you're actually listening! Delaney, you are right...I AM here for you, and to protect you from as much needless crud you're being forced to deal with! *rubs face and smiles* I'm not sure you wanna grow up to be someone like me---cause you're too good for that! ~_^ I for one loved this---and didn't find anything wrong with it! *smiles and snoots* Lol---that's right...we'll sit in your basement and listen to our Industrial music---and occasionally get visits from Brian! ^_^ Tyhla du dra piyd uv so seht! |
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Pollita Member
since 2002-07-25
Posts 220the unknown realm of insanity |
I LOVES YA TOO! Why souldn't I grow up like ya...? No im not too go for that....Im not to good for nothing...except maybe death... but thats getting off topic! hehehehehehe  and OF COURSE i remembered the dark duo! I LOVE YOU EVEN MORE NOW... Because you jacked me from krista! and yup of course we'll go in my basment and listen to our music!... YOU BRING DA MUSIC AND I BRING DA POPCORN!!!! Thats what i say to that! |
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Android 17
since 2001-07-21
Posts 664Winnipeg |
Let's try and leave that poor pony out of this! Tyhla du dra piyd uv so seht! |
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Pollita Member
since 2002-07-25
Posts 220the unknown realm of insanity |
Okay alex it's a deal...ponies are cool...I'll phone ya since i can't go on the computer...i have no homework and my mom don't belive me!...expect a call...when i get down stairs! |
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cherish Senior Member
since 2001-03-25
Posts 1639swimming in fairy floss........... |
 Hey Delaney, what you said in your reply about mothers not believing you when you say youve no homework made me grin. Thanks sweetie- I needed that. Lovely poem you've got in your hands here. He's got a fine list of poems about him, no doubt this one tops the lot. Keep smiling little one  Are you scared? |
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Pollita Member
since 2002-07-25
Posts 220the unknown realm of insanity |
AWW THANK YOU CHERISH! Ya i hope this poem of him tops ALL of them! Because...I just want to know my work went into good use....and it did because alex LOVES it! And as long as he likes it, my work was worth while! Talk to you laterz |
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Android 17
since 2001-07-21
Posts 664Winnipeg |
Awww---Delaney! ^_^ Hehehe... Mmmm, and there's so many poems to choose from! I can't quite pick the one that tops them all. Tyhla du dra piyd uv so seht! |
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Pollita Member
since 2002-07-25
Posts 220the unknown realm of insanity |
Ya alex I bet there's ALOT of poems that are about you!... Alex you have TOO many poems that are about you!...Lol...but hey...it's a good thing! Me...i have 2 poems that are about me!...thats all!...lol...but thats okay...omg...yesterday was really bad...my friend was having a HORRIBLE time! |
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Android 17
since 2001-07-21
Posts 664Winnipeg |
Awww---what happened? Tyhla du dra piyd uv so seht! |
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Pollita Member
since 2002-07-25
Posts 220the unknown realm of insanity |
Well the whole group was ganging up on her...and stuff like that |
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Local Parasite
since 2001-11-05
Posts 2527Transylconia, Winnipeg |
I thought this was cute, Delaney... Do you know that Alex brags about you non-stop?He's really proud of you... heh... Parasite Learn to place poetry before people |
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