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BabieDoll
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since 2003-02-13
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BFE

0 posted 2003-03-11 07:28 PM


Sweet kisses on thy lips
Shield me not of this
Cruel, harsh world
Yet sweep me into
But a moment of bliss
Of just you and I
Together *

"In life you must dance like no one is watching, sing like no one is listening and love like it's never going to hurt..."

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Darkness
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since 2002-10-17
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The place just beyond my eyes, where my spirit flies.
1 posted 2003-03-12 12:07 PM


I liked this! Short sweet and uncomplicated. Just like love should be! But, sadly it's not.

Keep up with the writing thingy, it's working for ya!
Darkness

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