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Painless
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since 2003-03-07
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Roc City, NY

0 posted 2003-03-07 02:00 PM


Am i wrong for trusting him?
for believing everything he says?
for doing whatever he asks me to?
sometimes i wonder if i am
he never treated me that good
but yet he still comes around
and still acts like were as one
but really were not
were not as one at all
why is he doing this to me
i want to be with him so much
but he still denies
denies me over and over
but i have found a resolution
no more for him
i am cutting him off
until....until
he starts listening to me
listening about my wants and needs
so he'll see what its like
what its like to be me
so am i wrong for doing this
or am i wrong for giving him a second chance?



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frolicking dolphin
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since 2003-02-23
Posts 268
my own special world
1 posted 2003-03-07 02:53 PM


Welcome to pip, Nice first post, I'm impressed,  it was very well written.  Can't wait to see more of your work

~*~Karen~*~

~Dream like you'll live forever,live like you'll die tomorrow~

aries_luv_ppl
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since 2001-09-20
Posts 1448
Universal Mind
2 posted 2003-03-07 04:37 PM


I won't give a damn about guys. If they don't treat me right the first time, out to garbage goes. But then you are not me.

~Every girl has a dream within.

Dopey Dope
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since 2000-08-30
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3 posted 2003-03-07 09:45 PM


I thought the poem expressed a very big problem some people have. They think that being with some one means living for them. Nope nope....... you don't have to do everything he says. You don't have to put up with him anymore. It's all a choice you make. You might like him a lot, but does it mean you have to disrespect yourself by putting his needs before yours?
What I mean by that is..... you're not a slave, and you live for no one.

Love doesn't only mean companionship and so on, it's a form of understanding. If he doesn't understand you, maybe he shouldn't.... and maybe you should just move on.

Good luck and welcome to Passions.

Keep posting!!


-j-

Look at the sun and burn your eyes. You'll be fine in the end.

anonymousfemale
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since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797
Limbo
4 posted 2003-03-08 07:38 AM


Welcome to Passions

Decisions are interesting things. More often than not we cut off our nose to spite our face and burn ourselves in the process. In the end you've got to do what will benefit YOU as emotions seem to dictate what we can and cannot do.

You've posted a piece that I'm sure a lot of people will relate to in some way. I hope to see you around the forum but remember to reply as well as post. Enjoy it here.

~AF~

"Write something, even if it's just a suicide note." -- Gore Vidal

Painless
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since 2003-03-07
Posts 4
Roc City, NY
5 posted 2003-03-10 08:11 PM


thanx guys i write how i'm feeling and i didn't think it would get that much recognition but thanx L)

peace

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