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Teen Poetry #6

idyllic isolation

anya
Member

since 2002-07-27

Posts 393
London, UK

0 posted 2002-10-01 02:20 PM

Today I feel like I have said
all I have to say,
and that silence is the only balm that will sooth me.
And tonight solitude seems the only company I wish to keep.
I want to to get some oblivion,
just for a while fall in to the soft darkness of seclusion,
where I can become lost among my thoughts.
So leave me some time to spend with myself,
I will savour the calm
and revel in this idyllic isolation.

Local Parasite

Member Elite

since 2001-11-05

Posts 2527
Transylconia, Winnipeg

1 posted 2002-10-01 03:04 PM

Anya, anya, anya... it's so cheap to title your poetry by the last couple of words in the poem. You should know that.

I like the title, but it annoyed me to see it appear as the last few words in the poem.

You've developed a good theme here. Nice work.

Parasite

Learn to place poetry before people
Before you place your poetry before the people.
~Andrey Kneller

gymnast
Member

since 2001-11-18

Posts 80
Scotland.

2 posted 2002-10-18 11:49 AM

Great poem you've written here! I almost feel like going into my own private isolation!
I love this poem and I hope to read many more!
||Amanda||

Give All To Love, Obey Thy Heart. ~R.W.Emerson~

Riley

Senior Member

since 2002-07-18

Posts 1038
in the pouring rain

3 posted 2002-10-18 01:51 PM

* looks up * I agree with Parasite up there! Way up there!! ^ LOL, good job though!

~* Love humiliates you, hatered cradles you-White Olender *~

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

4 posted 2002-10-18 07:31 PM

Don't listen to Local P, he has no idea what he's talking about haha. I sometimes make the last words of my poem the title. I feel that the title should have the overall meaning or feel of the poem. If your last words symbolize that for you, no problem. I did it in "dead in the web of broken hearts". No worries there.
I enjoyed your poem muchly.

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