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Musings of an Insomniac
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Musings of an Insomniac |
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Marshalzu  
since 2001-02-15
Posts 2681Lurking 
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Musings of an Insomniac Drown the birds we hate their little voices cheeping, chirping, chatting. they hail the dawn in spiteful song it's late and day has come and we've missed our dreams. Just a little something I wrote recently. Andrew My Violent Bedtime Stories [This message has been edited by Marshalzu (01-30-2003 09:11 AM).] |
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anonymousfemale Member Elite
since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797Limbo |
Isn't that the truth? I would kill for five minutes of peaceful sleep that wasn't Prince V induced. Realistic and of course with your wonderful touch of flowingness and whatnot. Don't ask.  Thanks for sharing Mr Zu. MORE!!!!!  ~AF~ "Write something, even if it's just a suicide note." -- Gore Vidal |
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Spine Grinder Senior Member
since 2000-10-28
Posts 1127Standing In Silence... |
yes, i agree. totally. i liked this alot, like usual lol great write!! If You Wanna See A Rainbow, You've Gotta Live Through The Rain. And If You Wanna See Through Love, You've Gotta Live Through The Pain. |
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Marshalzu
since 2001-02-15
Posts 2681Lurking |
Thank your for the replies they are much appreciated  |
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chasing rain Senior Member
since 2001-05-15
Posts 737Canada |
Long time no read. ^^ Loved it. Kinda cute, but it sort of reminded me of Gollum in The Two Towers... AWWW!!! Okay, I'm done. ^^ -Leah |
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Ina Senior Member
since 2000-10-09
Posts 1236Quebec, Canada |
Andrew this was very awesomness...(lol..funny word)...sleep *drool*....im so tired....the poem was crazy good and the format was very intersting...another wonderful poem...ooohhh ive said your poem is good in like a thousand different ways...*smacks self in forehead*..im leaving now Regina aka"tired" "heaven truley knows that thou art false as hell...one that loved not wisely,but too well..she swore..'twas a strange ,'twas passing strange"-othello |
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