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Hallucination Member
since 2001-03-18
Posts 419 |
" I Miss It" (23/01/03) © 2003 Brian Eggertsen, All Rights Reserved Verse 1 My heart is covored in dust Nobody to wipe it off, Can't believe it's been so long since I last loved. My eyes try to hold back tears As my world get's more lonely, Why ain't the love of my life right here with me. Dreams are fading away, No tomorrow or yesterday. Memories are gone... Chorus I miss the one who made me complete. I miss the one with eyes just for me. I miss it, can't believe I'm living without it. I miss the one who kissed me goodnight. I miss the one with loves strongest light. I miss it, can't believe I'm breathing without it. Verse 2 My heart misses an embrace Won't believe the things it does, Sitting in the rocking chair of what was. I'm beginning to give in Cause there's no one by my side, Guess it's me and yet another empty night. The web of the pain hurts, L-o-v-e's barely a word. That I reconize... Chorus Bridge I don't know what to do, anymore. Don't know how to move on, anymore. Where do I go from here, I don't know. Why can't I have it back, I don't know. Chorus |
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Darkness Member
since 2002-10-17
Posts 202The place just beyond my eyes, where my spirit flies. |
This is good/sad. I liked the chorus it had nice flow. The way a chorus should be written. If this happened to you I'm sorry. Love can be as fleeting as a shooting star sometimes. Anyway... Good Piece Darkness |
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