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Pollita
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the unknown realm of insanity

0 posted 2002-12-21 10:39 AM



I should have known,
It was too good to be true.
I knew,
That you'd do this.

But so soon,
You left me in tears.
That was just you,
No regard for anyone else's feelings.

I was there for you,
When you were alone on the floor.
I was there to make you feel better,
When you were crying.

You repayed me,
By hurting me.
I can't fogive you,
I can't do anything about it.

Sorry it had to be this way,
You should have kept your mouth shut.
He knows,
And now everyone else knows too.

© Copyright 2002 Delaniie Quirk - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-12-21 02:52 PM


Uh, dearie? I hope this isn't directed at me, cause I didn't say anything to anyone... If it's not directed at me, who is it, cause I want to beat them (with a feather... quite painful). :/
xxxnuttyangelxxx
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since 2002-12-06
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2 posted 2002-12-21 04:09 PM


Excellent poem, it remined me of my boyfriend and me for some reason.  Thanks for sharing.  This piece is goin in my library. bye

much luv,
shea

Pollita
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since 2002-07-25
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3 posted 2002-12-21 08:42 PM


No No No Rhonda this isn't directed to you,
It's directed to my friend Amanda!
So don't worry,
But Im over it.
No need to avoid me anymore.

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