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Teen Poetry #6

Time to Time

lukeyd
Junior Member

since 2002-12-19

Posts 11

0 posted 2002-12-19 09:21 AM

I look in the mirror,
As tears fall from my eyes.
Time slips away,
And it makes me realize.
All that has gone on,
And all that I have lost.
It all seems o fruitless.
And look at the cost.
I have missed so much,
In such a short time.
With everything I have missed.
It should be a crime.
I love you so much,
This I wish you to know.
And when I'm away,
It brings me so much sorrow.

----Lukey-D----

knightlyshadows
Senior Member

since 2001-04-14

Posts 791
obscured vision

1 posted 2002-12-21 04:51 AM

this was a nice write. i thought it could be a bit longer, but i still like it as is. there's a typo in the middle, but that's all good. keep posting.

“A single choice can build destinies, or destroy them.”

..You can't fight the tears that aren't coming..

Lakewalker
Member Elite

since 2000-08-05

Posts 3289
On the streets w/ people

2 posted 2002-12-23 12:52 PM

Hey, this was good, keep writing and posting here. Oh, you webpage link on your profile didn't work by the way.

"Be kind for everyone you meet is fighting a harder battle" Plato.

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