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the_loner_23
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since 2002-06-08
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0 posted 2002-08-29 01:52 PM


I am so bored
I don't know what to do
So I decided to write
A poem or two
Hopefully they will be good
But I don't know if they will
Because when I am bored
I don't write that well

Cold hands means a warm heart

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VAS
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since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450
Oregon
1 posted 2002-08-29 02:13 PM


ptui to ennui
it's a lot of hooey
but it sure can take hold
and make wimps of the bold

now you may think this criticism
but it's not a kind of ism
at all
it's just that your words have driven
me over the wall

I enjoyed your boredom and the product that it made, for it sent me off a pondering, though I'm far from getting paid. Want to say, as encouragement, a phrase of scripture you might use:

"This too shall pass."

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

Tammy Blessing
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since 2002-08-26
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2 posted 2002-08-29 02:20 PM


LOL...just remember, some of us don't write that well even when when we're not bored..
Peace,love,light and happiness
Tammy

Toerag
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since 1999-07-29
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Ala bam a
3 posted 2002-08-29 02:31 PM


Just think! Ya could be like me....my poetry is so boring whether I'm bored or not?...And I keep writing the crap just to keep Balladeer from getting bored.....
ThunderMage
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since 2002-06-20
Posts 812
Canada
4 posted 2002-08-29 10:33 PM


You write better than I do Julie.

What is life without poetry and adventure?
"Little sister" is just another way of saying "Guardian Angel"!

Madame Chipmunk
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since 2001-12-05
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5 posted 2002-08-29 10:40 PM


A great thing to do if you're bored
is to come to Piptalk to be restored
at least you'll never be ignored
you might even be metaphored.... LOL
~ silly hugs

Lyra

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

Inuwindow
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since 2002-08-29
Posts 12

6 posted 2002-08-29 10:42 PM


We all get bored now and than, and at least you found some words to spill forth, and create a vision for us to see, to keep us from becoming bored. Thanks for sharing this poem tonight.
Mistletoe Angel
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7 posted 2002-08-29 11:17 PM




Yay!!! So whenever you're bored, drop on by Passions. Where the inspiration is endless, it'll just keep on flashin! (smiles) This is a wonderful heartfelt poem, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Helen, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

ecrivan
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since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923
my own state
8 posted 2002-08-29 11:45 PM


look at all the source material out there, take that with some of the comments around..like other saying they write just as you do to keep the juices going...and when in doubt do what I do read a book, watch a film..talk to a friend about something new
or something old..and put that in your own words with the dazzle of a your imagination


[This message has been edited by ecrivan (08-29-2002 11:47 PM).]

Earth Angel
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Realms of Light
9 posted 2002-08-30 01:46 AM


If I were to be completely honest with you, I have never been bored for very long--in my free time. Note I said 'free time'. I've attended many a lecture that had me climbing up the walls! B-O-R-I-N-G!---but even then I'd find ways to amuse myself. Ecrivan has many wonderful suggestions in the poem he posted for you. The people at PIP are a very caring bunch and you are a part of that bunch! Take Care---you are not alone Loner!

Love, Light & Laughter
Linda


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Gaia
10 posted 2002-08-30 02:15 AM


ROTFLMAO at the big toe reply.
Boredom can be inspirational.

Did I really just say that???
Enjoyed the read, loner. But you aren't so alone now, are you?

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