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WhiteRose
Member Elite

since 2002-07-23

Posts 3208
somebody's dungeon

0 posted 2002-08-26 08:37 AM

The day I met you
there was placed
within me
a need..

so intense
so enveloping
and all encompassing
that it controls
my every breath
taken in your absence..

a shallow breath..
a desperate attempt
to stay alive
until you return.

WhiteRose

Touch me with your whispers,
and I'll listen with my heart.

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

1 posted 2002-08-26 09:27 AM

There's some serious love going on here!

Well done. Chris

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

Kitty**
Member

since 1999-07-27

Posts 428
Charlottesville,VA USA

2 posted 2002-08-26 10:22 AM

VERY GOOD! I understand this quite well,
and you said it quite well ! ;-)

Kitty

* That which gives light, must endure burning *

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

3 posted 2002-08-26 10:29 AM

WhiteRose
A lovely write, enjoyed the read

Gabriel Frost
Member

since 2002-08-15

Posts 216
Between midnight thoughts

4 posted 2002-08-26 11:34 AM

Splendid poem.I can totally relate.

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

5 posted 2002-08-26 12:04 PM

WhiteRose - Your words say it all...

BC

Madame Chipmunk
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-12-05

Posts 8296
Michigan

6 posted 2002-08-26 01:58 PM

Lovely romantic thoughts here, Anne...
beautifully expressed.

~ chipmunky hugs

Lyra

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled" Gwendolyn Brooks

Toerag
Member Ascendant

since 1999-07-29

Posts 5622
Ala bam a

7 posted 2002-08-26 05:21 PM

Just call me "need"....okay? Oooop, I mean when in need....slight slip of the tongue there...speaking of slips of the tongue...oh, never mind

[This message has been edited by Toerag (08-26-2002 05:30 PM).]

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

8 posted 2002-08-26 10:39 PM

(smiles) Oh Anne, this is beautiful and I know what you mean because I love my Joanna so so much and yet I stay strong for her that I will have her soon! (sigh) This is heartfelt, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Anne, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

9 posted 2002-08-27 09:58 AM

enjoyed

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