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MARK V SHELDON
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0 posted 2002-08-24 04:09 PM


"ONCE WRINKLE-FREE"

(Copyright 2002 by: MARK V SHELDON)


knowing eyes
conceal
those times

whilst
reverie
once wrinkle-free

adorns thoughts of gravity


"AS ABOVE SO BELOW"

© Copyright 2002 Mark V Sheldon - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-08-24 04:27 PM


HAHA. I remember wrinkle free.
Nicely done, Mark.

MARK V SHELDON
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2 posted 2002-08-24 04:30 PM




-MVS

"AS ABOVE SO BELOW"

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3 posted 2002-08-24 04:56 PM


...EXCELLENT!!...

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4 posted 2002-08-24 04:57 PM


Mark,
Excellent, the fewer the better.

Madame Chipmunk
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5 posted 2002-08-24 05:00 PM


Oh yes... I too, remember wrinkle free days...
A fun read, Mark...  nice to meet you!
~ elderly chipmunk hugs

Lyra

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

MARK V SHELDON
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6 posted 2002-08-24 05:21 PM


Thank you, Nancy...

Sy, a good pun, Sir!

Lrya, the pleasure is mine

-MVS

"AS ABOVE SO BELOW"

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7 posted 2002-08-24 06:46 PM




(big hugggsssss) Oh Mark, this is wonderful, sweet friend, I love it! You always express so much in so few words, I LOVE IT, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Mark, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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8 posted 2002-08-24 07:07 PM


Yikes, how bad is this; I don't even remember wrinkle free days! Or days that my hair was not silver.  Oh Groan!!!

Marti      

"Even if life is full of thorns,
I still embrace it, for I know
that in between those thorns,
there is a rose worth all the pain."

MARK V SHELDON
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9 posted 2002-08-24 07:19 PM


Thank you, as always, Noah -- glad you enjoyed.

Marti, it can't be that bad...  just remember what a friend once told me:  "It's okay to grow old as long as you never grow up."  Words of wisdom...  Anyways, who says that this poem concerns the obvious thing about age, anyway...?

-MVS

"AS ABOVE SO BELOW"

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