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Open Poetry #22

The Tender Getaway

1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2002-08-22 11:32 PM

The Tender Getaway

a whisper
stirs silence
in the
air we
share
and finds us
in a place
beneath
fallen rainbows
slid
under sunsets
in darkness
dripping candles
and there
in those
moments
I am
not afraid
to share
myself
and let
all go
to be
in the
tender getaway

Krishankins

Senior Member

since 2002-06-23

Posts 972
Texas

1 posted 2002-08-22 11:41 PM

Very nice!! I likes!
You are a very sensual writer, slick one.

VAS
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-16

Posts 7450
Oregon

2 posted 2002-08-23 12:25 PM

I like this all the way to the end, then I get confused. Maybe I'm just too tired, hope it's not because I'm too dense.

can you try help me understand the "tender getaway" in the contest of the poem, pretty please

This flows so well with such fine images, I don't want to miss any part of its meaning

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

Thomas119gold
Senior Member

since 2002-06-03

Posts 708
Biloxi, MS (city by the sea)

3 posted 2002-08-23 12:51 PM

HMmmmmmm very interesting

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

4 posted 2002-08-23 11:06 AM

helen - very tender write, as you do. And I'm sure a very tender getaway...

BC

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

5 posted 2002-08-23 11:37 AM

1slick_lady
They are all tender gateways, enjoyed.

Toerag
Member Ascendant

since 1999-07-29

Posts 5622
Ala bam a

6 posted 2002-08-23 11:54 AM

Everyone should get away more often like this....

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