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Tiersdin
Member Elite

since 2000-11-17

Posts 2364
east coast

0 posted 2002-08-18 06:01 AM

I need you...
say it with
feeling &
know you mean it

I want you...
let the embers
burn white hot
as we lay upon
the ash of our
emotions-
this delicate
connection untamed
potion

Linger here
one sacred second
blessed with your
kiss
your embrace
your manliness
deny not
the intensity
as we listen
to the sound
of pure desire
Remembering to refrain
from love...

~Tier
8/02

"I shall never bond again, as I have bonded with you..."

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

1 posted 2002-08-18 09:59 AM

OH...

This floated down the page like a feather!

so soft and whispery, the quality here captured that moment of not finding a moment so perfect that one is almost afraid to breathe for fear of changing it. Absolutely gorgeous!

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

2 posted 2002-08-18 10:01 AM

Tier....very powerful...what person could
ever even concieve not responding to as
passionate a plea as you have shown us here.

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

3 posted 2002-08-18 10:03 AM

Tiersdin
Well done enjoyed the read.

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

4 posted 2002-08-18 05:12 PM

(smiles) Awwwwwwww, and may loves eternal refrain always sing like church bells in your hearts and bring smiles every day forever! (kiss on cheek) This is wonderful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Tiersdin, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

bsquirrel

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-01-03

Posts 7855

5 posted 2002-08-19 12:29 PM

As Sen says, it starts like a feather. But the end, about refraining from love, is like chewing glass.

In short, a classic Tiersdin work.

Mikey

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

6 posted 2002-08-19 01:08 PM

Simply lovely. Chris

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

Lady In White

Member Elite

since 2001-02-12

Posts 2799
USA

7 posted 2002-08-19 01:12 PM

This is breathing
life,
quietly...

well done, Tier

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

8 posted 2002-08-19 02:19 PM

Tier - a wonderful write to read...

BC

Duncan
Member Ascendant

since 2001-08-07

Posts 5455

9 posted 2002-08-19 02:23 PM

Damn, this is good. All I can say is, 'Yep'.

Moonlight Romeo

Senior Member

since 2001-09-10

Posts 982
The heart of you

10 posted 2002-08-23 12:40 PM

Refraining from love isn't as easy when the verses are like this.

Thank you.

What light through yon window breaks? It is the east, and Juliet is the sun.

WhiteRose
Member Elite

since 2002-07-23

Posts 3208
somebody's dungeon

11 posted 2002-08-23 12:44 PM

Very soft, very beautiful. Enjoyed

brian sites
Senior Member

since 2002-06-25

Posts 1475
usa

12 posted 2002-08-23 12:47 PM

yes the last line
catches
the soft pain
beautiful Tiersdin
brian

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