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Marsha
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0 posted 2002-08-22 10:19 AM


Trust In True

The words that your lips caress
Touch my soul with love’s finesse
They settle over my heart like this
A cloak of love, a soul’s kiss
I know what you feel for me
Love flows from you constantly
I’m bathed in joy and love’s light
Held in wonder every night

The touch of love that you bring
Causes me to always sing
Arias spilling from within
Notes of love caress my skin
This true love that touches me
Fills me with warmth totally
I’m blessed with a love that’s true
Arrayed in love I’m born anew

The kiss of truth that you share
Brushes my soul with tender care
I’m held by your love safe and warm
Never to feel my heart is torn
You trust me and I trust you
Simple truth will see us through
The words of love touch my soul
And loving you keeps me whole

Your lips caress words of this
True love is sealed in trust’s kiss

Marsha



Breathe through the heat of our desire
Thy coolness and they balm
Let sense be dumb let flesh retire
Speak through the earthquake wind and fire

© Copyright 2002 Marsha Grace Melody Todd - All Rights Reserved
Seymour Tabin
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1 posted 2002-08-22 10:26 AM


Marsha,
A delightful write and read and my favorite is....You trust me and I trust you
Simple truth will see us through

VAS
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2 posted 2002-08-22 10:51 AM


Yep, I agree with Sy!

Isn't love grand!

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

Bill Charles
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3 posted 2002-08-22 01:29 PM


Marsha - love your words...

True love is sealed in trust’s kiss...

BC

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4 posted 2002-08-22 02:08 PM


I like this gentle beauty very much, Marsha. *S* Showing our bodies is hard enough for many (especially those of us with bodies that should never be seen *G*)... but showing our naked souls is even harder. But when love and trust are both there, you have magic... and this whispers that magic. *S*
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5 posted 2002-08-22 02:16 PM


A tender and enjoyable poem. Chris

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

Joyce Johnson
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6 posted 2002-08-22 02:19 PM


A joyous well written poem.  Joyce
S Arthur Grey
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7 posted 2002-08-22 02:44 PM


and true to your style, this
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8 posted 2002-08-22 10:05 PM


These are words of treasure to me...

"You trust me and I trust you
Simple truth will see us through"

truly enjoyed, Marsha!

mycafe

Keep counting your blessings

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9 posted 2002-08-22 11:01 PM


A lovely poem of love and trust, Marsha...
Excellent...
~ trusting chipmunk hugs

Lyra

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"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

Krissy
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10 posted 2002-08-23 06:59 PM


Mum I love this what can I say it is one of your prettiest, still mummy darling when that is all you can do……… some of us write well, and some only try.

No really mummy I do love this it is short and that has to be a bonus
You know I wub you weally
wots and wots
Krissy


And while thy willing soul transpiers
at every pore with instant fires
Andrew Marvell 1621-1678

[This message has been edited by Krissy (08-23-2002 07:27 PM).]

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11 posted 2002-08-23 10:58 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwwww, this is sooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, I love it, and may loves truth always fill your heart with happiness! (kiss on cheek) This is excellent, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Marsha, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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12 posted 2002-08-23 11:58 PM


Marsha, I love simple truths, and the simple truth is, this is quite lovely!
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