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Krawdad
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since 2001-01-03
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0 posted 2002-08-18 11:05 PM


Glimpse


I rise from my groggy sleep
from too large dreams
I get   withlostin

though I saw you there
         . . . somewhere
                                   I could not touch

My morning images flickerrrrrr
in screened light to my eyes
as clear as glass!

but there is really nothing there
and no thing I can touch
It could be last               week
It could be last                                         year

have I slept so long                          ?

          . . . Tonight
          will you be there Tonight?
  
  
  

©  081802


© Copyright 2002 Krawdad - All Rights Reserved
Enchantress
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Canada eh.
1 posted 2002-08-18 11:10 PM


Very very clever write!!
Wonderful presentation!
Yes...I'll be there.
~Hugs~

~ Time has cast a spell on you
  So you won't ever forget me ~

ThisDiamond
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since 2002-02-22
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Michigan, USA
2 posted 2002-08-18 11:12 PM


Extremely expressive poem. Enjoyed the interesting presentation. ThisDiamond
misery_made_beautiful
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3 posted 2002-08-18 11:14 PM


Very smart!
Enjoyed it much.

P.S. You kind of look like someone from "The Lord of the Rings" movie

Looking forward to reading another from you.

"Aging keeps life interesting"

Mistletoe Angel
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4 posted 2002-08-18 11:14 PM




(smiles) All I know for sure is that we will always be here for you as you continue to grace us with your wonderful words! (big hugggssssss) This is gorgeous, sweet friend, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet E.J, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace
5 posted 2002-08-19 12:14 PM


stunning
nichola_louise
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since 2002-08-17
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Adelaide, Australia
6 posted 2002-08-19 01:06 AM


I really did get a 'glimpse' into your world. Wonderful written, amd brilliantly presented......
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