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Seymour Tabin
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0 posted 2002-08-17 07:37 AM


A Mention

I’m subject to her pension.
To her mention of intention
A dabble in inequities
My rabble of iniquities

She holds me to a dreamers wile
By showing me her subtle smile.
And glances me with flutters lid
To answer all her utters bid.

If I could I would this need
To bring about a happy cede
But life abides on cliffs abyss
It just won’t do to blow a kiss.

And you must ride eternals knight
Her favor in the sun and bright
A pledge a day to grace her way
Hug a squeeze, each shrug or leave and

I do, with all my heart and might
Every day and every night



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Sunshine
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1 posted 2002-08-17 07:56 AM



She is but light upon the breeze
a tinker's bell to gift you ease
tender in nights and ancy days
she comes to you with songs of praise...

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2 posted 2002-08-17 09:31 AM


Seymour~

Awwwwwww ...

And then this gift
of gentle pen ...
reaching out
to touch again~

*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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ethome
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3 posted 2002-08-17 09:39 AM


You just love it don't you?
Lovely warm open write to start the day!

Neeraja
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4 posted 2002-08-17 10:19 AM


And I enjoy with all my heart and might
every time everything you write!

Neeraja

Seymour Tabin
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5 posted 2002-08-17 10:32 AM


Sunshine,
You had me ROTF,

Marge,
Thank you sweet,

ehtome,
Thank you dear,

Neeraja,
You are a sweetheart,

Martie
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6 posted 2002-08-17 10:54 AM


Sy

A beautiful piece of heart!  

Marsha
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7 posted 2002-08-17 11:17 AM


Seymour darling heart and painted of the moons silvery trace this is again such a beautiful write, soft just like a minds kiss.

And I could spend the day’s delight
Awaiting the coming of your night
Spin colours into rainbows band
Then lay them gently in your hand
While your words paint the world anew
With colours in fantastic hue
And then my bands of rainbow light
Would add their glow to the night
Each day you gift these pages blue
With words that are uniquely you
You paint the sky and sketch the day
While your words dance in wordy play
        So let me sit and drink you in
        And muse upon your words within


Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy

Breathe through the heat of our desire
Thy coolness and they balm
Let sense be dumb let flesh retire
Speak through the earthquake wind and fire

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8 posted 2002-08-17 11:56 AM


You say a kiss
blown across abyss --
just wont do.
Trust me when I tell you true ...

Each day you paint my sky blue
color my world in rainbow hue
Fill my dreams with butterflies
send me sunbeams to make me sigh

Rhymes to say all the words once unspoken
Verses to display a promise not to be broken
Each morn these poetic gifts you bestow ...
each treasured more than you'll ever know

Wish upon the stars on any given night
They'll grant you winkies in dreamers flight.
Blow a kiss into the wind in wish of serenities send
A heart in mend ... a hand held out in inspires intend

We've built a bridge across the persist of this abyss ...
No distance exists when we touch in rhymed reminisce

~*~

*winkiewinkie*

  

If all the tear drops went to heaven
And if all the pain was confined ...
Would I be your salvation
could I make your spirit shine.

KWSB

Seymour Tabin
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9 posted 2002-08-17 12:02 PM


Martie,
Thank you love.

Marsha,
You fill the hive with nectars wear
And if I lite I'll die right there.
So please be kind a small reprieve
And I'll be back to tend to Eve.

Seymour Tabin
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10 posted 2002-08-17 12:11 PM


JM,
If spirits can indeed speak love
Then you fit me like a glove.
And I would rather speak with you
Than anything else I could do.

WWRS

[This message has been edited by Seymour Tabin (08-17-2002 12:14 PM).]

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11 posted 2002-08-17 12:13 PM


Yes,  Sir Sy,  it is a daily thing...is it
not,  this conveyance of need and love....

Nicely done..

Seymour Tabin
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12 posted 2002-08-17 12:18 PM


Magnus,
Yes it is and always was.

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13 posted 2002-08-17 01:27 PM




(smiles) Oh Seymour, this is soooooo beautiful, sweet friend, and may you always be the white knight you are as you always spread gentle grace across these pages! (sigh) This is just beautiful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Seymour, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Seymour Tabin
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14 posted 2002-08-17 04:07 PM


Noah,
Thank you for the reply and read.

Kethry
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15 posted 2002-08-17 08:08 PM


Sy, daily devotion - nice.
Keth

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown



Seymour Tabin
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16 posted 2002-08-17 09:08 PM


Keth,
Thank you dear.

vlraynes
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17 posted 2002-08-27 05:21 AM



Sy-
Lovely as always, my friend.
Much enjoyed this.
Hugs,
~Vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

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18 posted 2002-08-27 06:29 AM


Lovely Sy, enjoyed very much.

If I have touched one heart through my words, then I have acheived my dream...

Seymour Tabin
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19 posted 2002-08-27 07:43 AM


Vicky,
Thank you so much for searching this out.

Gentle Spirit,
And that you dear.

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20 posted 2002-08-27 09:36 AM


Smiling and sighing here.   You've done it again poet sir!! Enjoyed. Chris

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

Seymour Tabin
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21 posted 2002-08-27 11:14 AM


Thank you Chris.
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