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WhiteRose
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somebody's dungeon

0 posted 2002-08-14 10:36 AM


As we sit by the fire
sharing brandy just us two
I peer through the glass
to look in love at you.

I see your face clearly
through the glass in my hand
then I watch as you slowly
put down your glass and stand.

As you shed your clothes
your hard body all I see
there through the glass
I see desire for only me,

so I too slip quietly
out of my dress just then
you wrap your arms around me
and we make love again,

again and again
by the heat of the fire
oh love this is all I need
all I ever will desire.

WhiteRose

[This message has been edited by WhiteRose (08-14-2002 10:37 AM).]

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Professor Gloom
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of Depression
1 posted 2002-08-14 12:37 PM


Not sure why you needed a fire
except for the rhyme
this certainly is rather hot already.
Good poem

Gloom

Magician
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2 posted 2002-08-14 02:43 PM


Wow, I'm panting...so this is what these forums are about. J/K
Very nice visuals.


Magician
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3 posted 2002-08-14 02:43 PM


Wow, I'm panting...so this is what these forums are about. J/K
Very nice visuals.


Magician
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4 posted 2002-08-14 02:44 PM


Wow, I'm panting...so this is what these forums are about. J/K
Very nice visuals.


wranx
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Moved from a shack to a barn
5 posted 2002-08-17 09:22 PM


WhiteRose,
I think that you made Magician a bit...Jumpy

Nice thoughts penned nicely.

~wranx

In reply to "which way do we go?", the answer was never "straight", but, "progressively forward".      

~wranx~

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6 posted 2002-08-17 10:19 PM




(smiles) Oh Anne, this is beautiful, I love it, your words always spark such passiona nd beauty, I love it, may your heart always gets all it needs and deserves with joy, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Anne, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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