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Krishankins
since 2002-06-23
Posts 972Texas 
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Don't pull me off the edge of love I haven't learned to swim I'd drown within your fluid soul And never rise again your 100grit love is smoothing my soul |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
Tread the waters I'll keep you afloat Shall you start to sink My arms serve as your boat  just thought i'd do a poetic response, since i love the way you write these! |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
you shall not drown dear my soul shall envelope yours love is our life raft Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Dang Kris!! You are fantastic at these!! *the gal of Summertime....guess?* |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
You are a master of the short and sweet, to the point poems...and I am liking them very much! |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
Yep, definantly earned the *master* title with these... shall I bow now...or laters???  Love the "solid weakness" you portray here... ML ~D Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
It takes much to rise again.... This is terrific! Maree  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Krishankins Can't say it better then that, enjoyed. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (sigh) Oh Kristopher, this is wonderful, sweet friend, may your love give you the time to instruct you how to swim and trust you and may you share true joy forever! (sigh) This is excellent, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kristopher, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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