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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages 
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I wrote this one for a friend "Lee Furie", who inspired me to wrote once again. Thank you Lee! Timeless Timeless is the wind When it blows north, east, south or west Boundless is the sky Even when she's been cloudly dressed Her beams of love and light Will sooth your restless soul When she reaches out to you Gentle light beams within console Timeless is your voice Along with stream of wind Struggling anguish within Darken bittersweet mind Threshold of the night Don't lock the inner whole Among your shadows of sighs I'll comfort your tortured soul Don't be afraid to walk Don't ask the reason why 'Cause timeless is the wind And time is passing by Goodbye is not forever Forever is no more Twined with timeless borders Footprints across the shore Two pair side by side There were you walked alone Someone holding you tight Seems your guardian angel Wraps you with wings so light Goodbye is not forever Forever is no more And timeless is the wind Along borders of love Unbounded as the sky When time passes by 17/06/02 ~*Theresia~* |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
hey Char---I USED to wonder about the essence of time---then I realized, that was the antithesis to timelessness!!!  YOU my friend, are a doll! I'm happy to see you here again...this is a lovely bit o weave! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
This is lovely Charisma...James |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Charisma, where have you been!? So very glad to see you home, and it's wonderful to see the gift you've brought to us.... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Charisma, So nice to see you posting again and what a post you made. A lovely and wonderful write and a delight to read. |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
Ha my dearly missed sweet friend. Your friend was right, you should write Trust your thoughts to the white sheet Bring your words here for us to meet And we'll carry you forward to tomorrow Trying to ease a bit your pain and sorrow What beautiful verse you penned down again Charisma, eventhough it's sad it speaks of hope as indeed, goodbye is never forever.  TitiaLike scattered leaves...my words will flow [This message has been edited by Titia Geertman (06-23-2002 09:34 AM).] |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
I'm glad you were inspired to return, cause your words inspire me. "Goodbye is not forever Forever is no more And timeless is the wind Along borders of love Unbounded as the sky When time passes by" That is so good.. Sandra |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
CharismaMyFriend~ You know how I've waited for this .... 'Don't be afraid to walk Don't ask the reason why 'Cause timeless is the wind And time is passing by Goodbye is not forever Forever is no more Twined with timeless borders Footprints across the shore' Absolutely such a 'timeless' verse ... I'm keeping it close to my heart dearest poetess~ Welcome home~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Anvrill Senior Member
since 2002-06-21
Posts 710in the interzone now |
"Among your shadows of sighs I'll comfort your tortured soul" Wow.... I mean, wow.  Feel my angsty reachiness! |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
sooo good to see you again. This piece is not only breathtaking, but is indeed timeless....  I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~~(Garth) |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
"Goodbye is not forever Forever is no more And timeless is the wind Along borders of love Unbounded as the sky When time passes by"  YAY!!! OH MY GOSH, I'M SO HAPPY YOU'RE BACK, I MISSED YOU SO SO MUCH!!! (BIG HUGGSSSSSS) I am so happy Lee encouraged you to write again, you always have such beautiful words and it feels empty without your sile here! (kiss on cheek) Your inspirations are timeless, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Charisma, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
'Cause timeless is the wind And time is passing by Just beautiful, all of it. It rocked and rolled with such a gentle sway. Nicely done Charisma~ |
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Krishankins
since 2002-06-23
Posts 972Texas |
Charisma You couldn't have created a more timeless piece. It is wonderful!! Krishankins your 100grit love is smoothing my soul |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
"Boundless is the sky Even when she's been cloudly dressed" you know I love this part sweet one!!! *Welcoming back you AND your lovely muse* Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
It's wonderful to read your poetry again, Charisma! |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
liked it a lot |
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mycafe Senior Member
since 2002-05-23
Posts 584 |
Truly timeless is this poem, with its lovely words always lingering ... mycafe |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
serenity: thank you dear friend for your kind reply, and yeah im happy too to be back. JamesMichael: Thank you for the lovely James Sunshine: thank you Sunshine for your warm welcome home, glad you like this lil piece of me. Seymour: awwwww thank you sweetie for your wonderful comment, makes me happy to know that you liked it. Titia: Thank you dear friend, for your wonderful and kind reply, always heartwarming to have such good friends around. Have missed you and all the others too ((hugs)) catalinamoon: Glad to know that I inspire you, looking forward dear friend to your piece of inspiration. Marge: thank you so much beautiful lady, your comments means a lot to me, Glad you liked it Anvrill: *wow* that's what I thought to have all your wonderful comments, for the time all of you took to read and reply...thank you for the wow Gentle Spirit: thank you so much for your warm welcome home, and your kind comment. Glad to know that you liked it. Noah: (((warm hugs))) back at you, it's always a warm feeling to see you here, your comments always make my days. thank you dear Noah BluesSerenade: thank you for your kind comment Krishankins: thank you so much for taking time to read and reply, glad to know that you liked this timeless piece devina: awwwww thank you for your warm welcome back, and I like that part too Martie: Thank you Martie, hope that my muse will stay awaken. vandana: So glad you enjoyed it mycafe: thank you for your kind reply |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Timeless is the wind When it blows north, east, south or west Boundless is the sky Even when she's been cloudly dressed Her beams of love and light Will sooth your restless soul When she reaches out to you Gentle light beams within console Timeless is your voice Along with stream of wind Struggling anguish within Darken bittersweet mind Threshold of the night Don't lock the inner whole Among your shadows of sighs I'll comfort your tortured soul ============================= this is gorgeous poetry!! Beautiful imagery and inspire!! How very lovely..your writing has grown to wonderful heights!! Welcome back dear poetess C so wonderful to read you again. peace and poetry jm |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
What a wonderful write! I loved it Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
CharismaSweetie, I'm soooo glad I didn't miss this poem you've shared with us2day... A beautiful write dearPoetFriend... Hugs2u *~coco~* |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
ahhhh. . .welcome back my friend!! it's good to see you back. . . excellent work from you. . . I've missed reading it. . . -------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Janet Marie: thank you for the gorgeous, such a wonderful compliment from you, which I apreciated very much. Interloper: thank you dear friend, glad you loved it CocoBaci: and you made my day, always so good to see you, thanks for reading dear friend, have missed you too...missed reading here too. Sven: ah thank you so much for the excellent, I too have missed reading you Hugs you all |
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