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A box?!
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A box?! |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium 
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in the inside of the cage that surrounds a box there are bits and pieces and a whole range of spare parts you may pick and choose fight the fights in your head debate on what you want and need endlessly changing your desires but the form seems to elude you, as you yearn evermore true. constancy is stagnating true. life is expansive (but…) just because one feels great doesn’t always make it right a favourite robotic pet will still be a junk to some yet. what is junk to some is still saleable for others after all everything can be bought or sold in this wired connected world if the price is right one day my box will be bargained for and there will be hunters on a fault-finding mission, arguing -- with the enthusiastic salesman who wants to make a deal of his life a deal of my life -- just to get the price down as close to dust as possible between dawn and dusk one day true. one day. . . . |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Interesting...James |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
Tell it like it is!!! Enjoyed the poetic pieces of this!!! Take care~ D Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
hmmm...wow...there are so many ways to read this---I prefer the spiritual philosophy of it--a wonderful read, and interesting analogy sudhir...you are deep.  |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Wow, I love the spiritual feel of this, sweet friend, it shows that every thing has some worth and some value and that oe mans trash is another man's treasure! (big hugggssssss) This is escellent, sweet friend, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sudhir, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sudhir, Not he philosophy of Gandi but I enjoyed the read. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sudhir If your box holds your heart...then it is priceless! |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Thank you all my dear friends... for now the box holds mysteries (hopefully...) Regards, Sudhir |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
What a wonderful piece my friend. I thoroughly enjoyed it Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Suddy - this is one of the best I've seen from you my friend...the quality is striking - honest, bold, plain - yet achieving poetical integrity...it works well... hugs  K |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Thanks so very much, Interloper and Kamla, my dear friends... (one of my best, eh? )Regards, Sudhir |
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