navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #21 » Finch Love Song
Open Poetry #21
Post A Reply Post New Topic Finch Love Song Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
VAS
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450
Oregon

0 posted 2002-06-23 12:56 PM


Finch Love Song

Seeds for two
just me and you
on this front porch café.

In the gentle breeze
after all-night rains
we dine the morn away.

Neath the drip, drip, ping
to the lowing swing
of a carousel so fine

With feathered crest
over tawny breast
I find that you are mine.

©June 23, 2002

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

© Copyright 2002 Virginia Salter - All Rights Reserved
Corinne
Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167
state of confusion
1 posted 2002-06-23 01:00 PM


Sweet tweet!

Core

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549
By the Seaside
2 posted 2002-06-24 11:06 PM


The images that come to mind are just too sweet.  Your thoughts were so comfortable and easy to read....liked this a lot~  
TwoHeartsOnePen
Member
since 2002-06-07
Posts 60
state of determination
3 posted 2002-06-25 12:19 PM


adorable work here..

Distance is the prison for our bodies, but no prison could weaken our passion.

Interloper
Deputy Moderator 1 TourDeputy Moderator 1 Tour
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369
Deep in the heart
4 posted 2002-06-26 11:44 AM


I love it!

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

Mistletoe Angel
Deputy Moderator 10 ToursDeputy Moderator 10 ToursDeputy Moderator 5 Tours
Member Empyrean
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon
5 posted 2002-06-26 10:09 PM




(smiles) Awwwwww, this is soooooo beautiful, sweet friend, may your love always sing twet tweet to your heart and bring great happiness to you forever! (kiss on cheek) This is lovely, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You hav such a beautiful heart, sweet Virginia, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Post A Reply Post New Topic ⇧ top of page ⇧ Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.
navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #21 » Finch Love Song

Passions in Poetry | pipTalk Home Page | Main Poetry Forums | 100 Best Poems

How to Join | Member's Area / Help | Private Library | Search | Contact Us | Login
Discussion | Tech Talk | Archives | Sanctuary