Depression (1 of four pieces)

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Open Poetry #21

Depression (1 of four pieces)

Ladycat

Senior Member

since 1999-07-05

Posts 782
At the edge and a doorway,TX

0 posted 2002-06-23 08:19 AM

Another sleepless night in San Francisco
Another person sings a drery love song
They walk a mile over a thousand streets of gold
Light shining off their new shoes
At one time they were together and now nothing
The song plays on and on
As somewhere in the world she sings too
While glacing out the window of her twelve story building
She steps to the balconey to get a breath of fresh air
Her singing stops
Her heart hardens
And she falls to her knees
He is gone
Left Earth bound for another place
She weeps her final tears and walks inside to sleep
Tonight she is depressed again

Love,
Ladycat

Live in my world just once and you'll find yourself enraptured.

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

1 posted 2002-06-23 10:10 AM

Sad story, beautifully penned.
Sandra

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

2 posted 2002-06-23 05:32 PM

Nice expression...James

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

3 posted 2002-06-23 08:32 PM

(big hugggsssssss) Oh Vynette, this is so very heasrtaching, sweet friend, my heart goes out to them both and I hope the additional parts of this series reveals a whole new hope and replenished love! (sigh) This is heartfelt, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Vynette, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

bsquirrel

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-01-03

Posts 7855

4 posted 2002-06-24 02:18 AM

I'm feeling down myself. This is a nice balm...

Thanks, Ladycat.

These smiling eyes are just a mirror for the sun.
-RHCP

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

5 posted 2002-06-24 06:52 PM

Ladycat,

The feelings flow from this poem. And the
imagery very clearly allows the readerto
see what the characters are doing. Nice
write...

Balladeer

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-05

Posts 25505
Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA

6 posted 2002-06-24 09:58 PM

love the feeling you were able to put into these words, Ladycat....I was there

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