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Open Poetry #21

You and Me

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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since 2000-01-29

Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia

0 posted 2002-06-11 12:39 PM

YOU AND ME...

I want to love you like I used to
I want to laugh with you out loud
I want to look in your eyes and have you see me
I want to find your face in a crowd

But

You don't love me like you used to
You don't laugh with me out loud
You don't look in my eyes just to see me
You don't find my face in a crowd

But

Can we love each other like we used to
Can we laugh with each other out loud
Can we look in each other's eyes and know what we see in them
Can we find each other's face in a crowd

Roniece Dawson-Bruce

wayoutwalt
Member Elite

since 1999-06-22

Posts 4870
TEXAS (it's all big)

1 posted 2002-06-11 12:40 PM

from the heart write
poetry well done

the_loner_23
Member Ascendant

since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

2 posted 2002-06-11 12:40 PM

very sweet

Cold hands means a warm heart

Poet deVine

Administrator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-26

Posts 22612
Hurricane Alley

3 posted 2002-06-12 01:50 PM

Sometimes it's hard to hold on to something special like this love...enjoyed your poem!

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