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wayoutwalt
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0 posted 2002-06-12 01:58 AM


The Thinker has escaped
Put the nation on alert
‘cuz we know what freethinking does
Women and children may get hurt

                        

An age progression of Macaulay Culkin
Had these words to say
“If the Thinker is loose, we’re all cooked goose"
then he Screamed all night and day

                        

the Leaning Tower of Pisa
just couldn’t help but hear
leaning in on what’s been said
although he had no ears

                    

Whitman Blake and Tennyson
Caught word of where he’d been
The Thinker on his escapades
Through modern minded men

Kafka housed the thinker once
And cummings lied for him
Hughes had taught him all his blues
the Thinker was good to them

Baraka sent him on the train
The underground express
I heard he found good Tennessee
Was wearing Blanche’s dress

The Thinker shed his bronze encasing
On Spielberg’s shiny toys
Shot some art on fiber cable
For little girls and boys

                        

Inside the Thinker was Little Mac
From Mike Tyson Punch Out fame
he'd been tryin' so hard just to break out
and I hope you'll do the same

                        


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wayoutwalt
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1 posted 2002-06-12 02:09 AM


Famous Semi-Long Dead Poet Dudes



Walt Whitman     
William Blake     
Alfred Lord Tennyson     

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wayoutwalt
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2 posted 2002-06-12 02:19 AM


Famous Modernist Heroes of Mine



Franz Kafka     
e.e. cummings     
Langston Hughes     

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wayoutwalt
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3 posted 2002-06-12 02:21 AM


Playwrights who did it right!



Amiri Baraka     
Tennessee Williams     

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wayoutwalt
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4 posted 2002-06-12 02:24 AM


hehehe I do realize these are all men so go ahead and tear into me
ethome
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5 posted 2002-06-12 03:00 AM


Walt
I guess I'm not artsy fartsy enough to know what Van Gogh's ear had to do with this poem but I loved the graphics and the reference to all the different thinkers........
Really excellent work my man!

wayoutwalt
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6 posted 2002-06-12 03:26 AM


hehe what van gogh

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7 posted 2002-06-12 01:30 PM


I really enjoyed this.

                               Dawn

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8 posted 2002-06-12 01:35 PM


Interesting ... but I doan unnerstan'
EarthenSoul
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9 posted 2002-06-12 01:43 PM


What an excellent tribute!  Walt, this is very creative.  The graphics and words compliment each other perfectly.  Much enjoyed!
wayoutwalt
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10 posted 2002-06-12 01:51 PM


the thinker helped all these people cuz he was free.  inside he busted out and was truly free to be himself... i think of him as lil mac.. its up to the reader

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