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the_loner_23
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0 posted 2002-06-21 05:12 PM



Depression has set in
The blackness of rain is all around
My feelings are ones of sadness
These feelings I have just found
I can not hold back the hurt
The pain
The sadness
Anymore in my life
My life keeps getting messed up
Nothing I can do
Unless I take my own life
But I could never do that
So I must endure this depression I feel
And supress my feelings
To keep my friends and family happy
No matter how hard it is

Cold hands means a warm heart

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Sunshine
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1 posted 2002-06-21 05:19 PM



No, you must absolutely never get that low.  On a kinder note, do avail yourself of our guidelines, for depression is hard to fight, and sometimes we do reach for words that make others think "well, this is it, the end of the line..." and of course, we don't want to worry our readers...

I do enjoy your "up" poems.

catalinamoon
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2 posted 2002-06-21 05:24 PM


Take care, I hve been very depressed many times. Just keep fighting.
Sandra

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3 posted 2002-06-21 09:19 PM




(tears fall down my cheeks) Oh Julie, I am so sorry to see you are depressed, when I was a little boy, I used to be depressed every single day and felt I would be the whole rest of my life, until I turned to God and now I have become much more stronger though I still feel depressed sometimes! (sad sigh) My thoughts are with you, sweet friend, know you are loved by many, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Julie, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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4 posted 2002-06-25 02:27 AM


Whoa, what's this doing in open? Everybody here, god love 'em, worries about'cha when y' post somethin' so dark. So you should put it in Dark, where deaf ears will fall blacker than the heaviest rain. LOL. Just kidding.

Signed,
Going to bed guy

These smiling eyes are just a mirror for the sun.
-RHCP

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