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Open Poetry #21

Waltz of the Night

Tim
Senior Member

since 1999-06-08

Posts 1794

0 posted 2002-06-20 09:59 PM

The night is calm, earthscape aglow,
in golden rays of moon's bestow,
Darkness bathed in Luna's light,
forms shadows waltzing 'cross the night.
Then from afar, lone nightingale,
joins with the wind in night's regale,
Oak trees dancing with the breeze,
Cicada's singing symphonies,
While up above in starlit skies,
Venus opens wide her eyes,
Soft sapphires of the Milky Way,
light memories of fallen day.
Upon the land, night's soothing balm,
as evening sings her soothing calm,
Fathomless shines forth the night,
shines forth the glow of heaven's light.

the_loner_23
Member Ascendant

since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

1 posted 2002-06-20 10:01 PM

Yes this is considered awesome work

Cold hands means a warm heart

Martie

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Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

2 posted 2002-06-20 11:02 PM

Tim

I love the night and write of her...but no one does it like you do!

Poet deVine

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-26

Posts 22612
Hurricane Alley

3 posted 2002-07-04 12:31 PM

Oh my! Look at the jewel I found!! This is definitely worth reading. Absolutely lovely!

TwoHeartsOnePen
Member

since 2002-06-07

Posts 60
state of determination

4 posted 2002-07-04 12:39 PM

Did anyone ever tell you what a lovely poet you are, Sir? I enjoyed this.

Distance is the prison for our bodies, but no prison could weaken our passion.

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