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Krishankins
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0 posted 2002-07-02 11:07 AM


Peace floats on long curves of time
To needs beyond the drought
Seeing heaven touch and calm
The life of rainy clouds

A bird never flies so high that it can't hit the ground

© Copyright 2002 Kristopher Hankins - All Rights Reserved
Marsha
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1 posted 2002-07-02 11:13 AM


K darling heart you are a weaver of stars incandescent dreams WOW this is utterly utterly delightful you’ve written an absolutely precious think of poetic ink here. The flow of thought in this is wonderful and the rhythm absolutely divine. I love the image this brings so softly tenderly soft whispered dreams.  Write more much much more this is incredible writing. I’m awed by your writing simply awed



Love and warm stuff
As always
Slushy


Breathe through the heat of our desire
Thy coolness and they balm
Let sense be dumb let flesh retire
Speak through the eathquake wind and fire
Oh

RosePetal
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2 posted 2002-07-02 01:47 PM


*sigh* this is so lovely kris. You truly are the master of these short poems!


1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace
3 posted 2002-07-02 01:52 PM


bent past rain
you color
the curves
with emotions

Elan
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4 posted 2002-07-02 02:18 PM



Oh, we so need rain here, please, please, let the clouds storm a little longer...

Enchantress
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5 posted 2002-07-02 02:22 PM


Very very nice Kris!
~Hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

catalinamoon
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6 posted 2002-07-02 02:24 PM


Very lovely.
Let it rain.
Sandra

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Cali
7 posted 2002-07-03 11:19 AM


This is just lovely Kris...

I'd KILL for some on those rain clouds this way, always been my favorite time of year...

and? lucky clouds I'd say!!!

hugs you!!
Tanya

Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...



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8 posted 2002-07-03 11:39 AM




(smiles) Awwwwwwww, this is lovely, sweet friend, I just love he gorgeous small visions you captivate in your fabulous words! (sigh) This is lovely, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kristopher, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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9 posted 2002-07-03 11:53 PM


Beautiful...can you do a rain dance for me?
Suetang
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10 posted 2002-07-04 12:42 PM


Hello Kris

Yet another stunning piece of writing from you.  The imagery was fabulous and I applaud anyone who can say so much with so few words.

Take care.....Sue

Suetang

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