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Light Night Out |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee 
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Luminous blood orange waxed heavy at end of street day Summer this blaze of pleasure I sweat so sweetly down the drain of my thoughts for you I imagine silhouettes stirring, rasping into heat road ghosts lying on edges of curved road hurry burning last moment wisps before eve wicks light night out Soul kissed we are just one lane away where a timid moment flares silver in the rearview mirror and I am driven way beyond my normal routine |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Soul kissed we are just one lane away where a timid moment flares silver in the rearview mirror and I am driven way beyond my normal routine A lovely poem, Reg...and what a great way to meet someone.  ~ hugs from rearview mirrorLyra |
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Daniel van Vliet Member
since 2001-08-31
Posts 80 |
"Soul kissed" - great poem, thank-you! |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Reg... Silky smooth and vanilla ice... these are the words that you pen... Thanx.. |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Hello Regina Yet another masterful piece of writing you have given us. The images were outstanding. I love the way you write. Take care....Sue Suetang |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Luminous blood orange waxed heavy at end of street day Summer this blaze of pleasure I sweat so sweetly down the drain of my thoughts for you I imagine silhouettes stirring, rasping into heat road ghosts love the imagery in this .... quite a unique write here...cant recall any other poems with references to "heat road ghosts" but I'll be darned if thats not what those heat waves look like  ...I like the cryptic, cajun, "voodoo feel" of the south this has to it...(if that makes sense to anyone but me)  waaaay cool Reggie-girl. later-heatwave-gator "It's not about having what you want ... It's wanting what you've got" S.C. [This message has been edited by Janet Marie (06-19-2002 11:26 PM).] |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
I am windows and doors in limo dream metal you are reflections in mirrors enjoyed your images Regina but...can I drive? |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
what a ride hon, primo Regina stuff!! love it somy~ your words amaze....... I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~~(Garth) |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Awwwwwwww, this reminded me of the sun setting on Old San Diego whenb I was on vacation, sweet friend, this is beautifully passionate and shines with the sunshine! (kiss on cheek) This is awesome, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Regina, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Very nicely done.... "lying on edges of curved road hurry burning last moment wisps before eve wicks light night out" Those lines have a nice touch of imagery in them....enjoyable read!! |
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jellybeans Member Elite
since 2000-10-13
Posts 2298 |
would have to quote every word to quote my favorite lines.....wow........incredible as always |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
This is one way cool write Regina! Love it! ~Hugs~ |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
"way beyond my normal routine" you have one of those???  love it Reg. . . great work. . . ----------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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