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the_loner_23
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0 posted 2002-06-10 02:26 PM


I'm in love
I wanted every one to know
His name is Liam
He is as sweet as a rose

He loves me right
He loves me good
He loves me with all his heart
That I know

He calls me his angel
Says Hello beautiful

I'm in love
Oh yes I am
I love only one
His name is Liam




Cold hands means a warm heart

[This message has been edited by the_loner_23 (06-10-2002 03:27 PM).]

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catalinamoon
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1 posted 2002-06-10 03:40 PM


Cool, that is just how a man should treat you.
Stay happy
Sandra

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2 posted 2002-06-10 03:49 PM


You are a lucky lady to feel so much love and I hope that you and Liam are very happy together for a good long time.

Love,
Lady

Live in my world just once and you'll find yourself enraptured.


JamesMichael
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3 posted 2002-06-10 04:07 PM


I hope this love continues...James
Poet deVine
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4 posted 2002-06-10 04:08 PM


Sigh! Hang onto it! Tend it with care, love is a precious feeling!
LilTai
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5 posted 2002-06-10 06:40 PM


Congrats!! I know this feeling too and it's the best in the world.  This poem is right to the point =)  I love it, great write.

& thank you for reading some of my poems too =)

   Tai

I'm an idealist..I don't know where I'm going, but I'm on my way =)

DawnG
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6 posted 2002-06-11 01:24 PM


This is one of the sweetest poems I've read in a long time.

                    Dawn

ThunderMage
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7 posted 2002-06-20 03:58 PM


Awesome! I love this poem!

What is life without poetry and adventure?

A Romantic Heart
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Forever In Your Heart
8 posted 2002-06-20 04:03 PM


It is great to be IN LOVE, you have a muse to inspire you! a poet needs a muse, especially when writing love poems.

Ps...I guess now you will have to change your name,haha, your not a loner anymore!

[This message has been edited by A Romantic Heart (06-20-2002 04:04 PM).]

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